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Reviews for The Viper's bite

By : Malestorm
  • From ANON - Coreena on January 24, 2007
    I am trembling and I am happy so happy you are writing. This story is the best! I love it. I can not get enough and I am going to read the entire thing again after I finish this review!!
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on January 24, 2007
    OOOOOOO! Shivers... I so cannot wait to see what the next chapter holds...Keep up the great work! =)
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  • From ANON - Novicegirl on January 24, 2007
    It will not let me rate this I would give it a TEN!!

    Paula fianlly giving in!!! Now that he knows why she was resisting him some what I think He will take it easy with her....maybe not to easy lol. I love this. It just flows like a river. PLEASE more.
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  • From ANON - INC on January 24, 2007
    YES!!! I love it.I love it!!! This soooo wonderful to read. I salivate for more. It is so beautiful. Just like Ky'an Strength, honor, and passion.
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  • From ANON - evoD on January 24, 2007
    I had to chapter nine that I missed. but *sighs* I am in love with this story. So she is FINALLY going to give him what he wants. *runs around the room with scissors* You are so good at writing passion. Lovely!!!
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  • From Verbatim on January 23, 2007
    Aww Blu...I am not going to say it because you know what I am going to say. This is a beaut!! More

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  • From Malestorm on January 22, 2007
    I am working on it as I type well not right now I am typing Heh. The Viper will be up this week Promise! Bluflame

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  • From lovingall on January 22, 2007
    Please update soon

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  • From ANON - LovyDovy on January 22, 2007
    I love this story, but I can hardly wait for another chappie. Please let us or rather Paula have some Kyan already. If she won't beg I will Kyan baby! So sexy-ug you warrior you.

    Enough with the stories disappearing. Please keep going cause I need this!

    Missing my other warrior favs...Liakon, Wren, Bay, Samsun etc. (sighs)Honored Lorna please bring them all back...I'm dying here. Viper's bite is keeping me alive, but I hate not knowing what is going to happen. Pleeeaaasssee.

    Whats with the electronsiggy thingy? I mean why every time I visit? Feel like Big brother reading my diary or somethin'.
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  • From Khale on January 21, 2007
    I have to say you are a loevely writer. I love this story more and more everytime I read it. I can not wait for you to update. Please make it soon! William
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  • From Summersand on January 19, 2007
    Your writing is so wonderful I absolutely love it. You write Passion so well that I am jealous.

    This story is my favorite Predator fiction it is like a romance, hell it is a romance Yautja stlye! lol More please Iit is trully AWESOME!

    Are you going to write more?
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  • From Parts on January 18, 2007
    I am glad you stayed Blu!

    I would really cry if you left. You are my reading on my lunch hour. I love this beautiful piece of writing you have on display here.

    Although a few misguided souls are blaming you guys for this mess. 99.9% of us know better and that you guys DID NOTHING WRONG. This is like talking to a rape victim and it is SAD
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  • From littlemissy1503 on January 15, 2007
    love this story, really hope to read more soon. the editing helped the reading be more comfortable

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  • From lovingall on January 15, 2007
    As usual AWESOME writing Blu continue on no mattter what.

    BTW I read some rant where some people are complaining about having to log in. SO WHAT!!!! Isn't it amazing how people do not care about something until it happens to them. Let this guy start trolling or stalking (as Fadeaway Blond refers to it) in their neck of the woods and see how fast their attitudes changes. SELFISH just selfish. They act like they have to give up a rib or something. I do not understand. I saw the carnage; I got emails from Lorna and Spider; that crap aint right and NO ONE should have to put up with that kind of ABUSE. LOG in and HELP stop it.
    Sorry for the rant. Love this Blu I AM HAPPY YOU STAYED!!!
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  • From Azon on January 14, 2007
    I like your writing style. I can't wait for the next installment.
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