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Reviews for The Viper's bite

By : Malestorm
  • From ANON - Della Bear on January 27, 2007
    Ohhhhhh! Lovely, Ky'an and Paula finally allowing naturre to take its course and I can not wait!
    I do not think Se'tra will be able to contain her jealousy even if Jake'her threatened her with death. She knows what she has lost and she wants it back.
    This is awesome and you are too; keep it going forever Blu!
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  • From Allure on January 27, 2007
    I am so happy that you updated and this update is excellent!. I love Ky'an and Paula doing ANYTHING!! lol. Finally she gives in and I am happy that he wants to be her first and only. Awesome writing.
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on January 26, 2007
    You are wicked. Damn Cliffies. Love it, need more please.
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  • From wydow on January 26, 2007
    This is beautiful stuff. Ky'an and Puala getting closer. I like their interactions both vocal and physical. You are good at that I think *smiles* If I could rate this twice I would. Absolutely Lovely

    Hey I tried to rate it once but it did not work. I am at Kraven's house so that might be the reason you can not rate it twice no matter the author.


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  • From Mitresslove on January 26, 2007
    That was awesome! I can not wait for the next chapter Blu!. I love this story it keeps me hanging around here so you keep writing because you are Awesome at it.
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  • From ANON - Symetrical break on January 26, 2007
    YES! Finally Ky'an and Paula are getting together. I love the way you write them together, talking, touching or just looking at each other. You are amazing. I love this continue
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  • From ANON - aquamum on January 26, 2007
    Another hot chapter - excellent
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  • From Mackrel on January 25, 2007
    You evoke emotion into the reader and that is an awesome thing to accomplish.

    I love that Ky'an wants everything about Paula for himself and wants her to make the decision to beg for it rather than for him to take it.

    Wounded animals always attack when cornered. Se'tra will not lose to an Ooman, I would beware.

    Love and Romance Yuatja stlye is Awesome
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  • From ANON - bodydouble on January 25, 2007
    I did not think anyone could take an age old romantic theme of girl leaves guy for richer man; guy takes another girl to make first girl jealous but instead falls for the new girl. However, you have done that with awesome results.

    I Love this story; and the fact that you write it with such passion and beautiful words says to me that you love it too. I want to thank you for writing this , you have the gift and you use it with excellence.
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  • From ANON - LovyDovy on January 25, 2007
    The hunger and aching all so sexy! I love it. Paula can't eny all that masculine packaging. Setra will be out for blood. Thanks for updating regularly lately. Stop teasing already. More love and romance...you know bonding. Great predfic angst and author.
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  • From ANON - Deverwood on January 25, 2007
    Paula has finally accepted the fact that Ky'an is everything that she wanted and need in a man.

    I love that Ky'an said he would be her first and only. Loved it and good to see and know Lol
    Se'tra's fate will tear her apart and I wonder if her jealousy is greater than her fear of Jake'her
    I can hardly wait to for the next chapter. Awesome, trully awesome writing Blu.
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  • From ANON - Millen Stryker on January 25, 2007
    I guess Paula is finally giving in. Things are definitely heating up... in a big way.

    Serves Se'tra right! She's been given a fate far worse than death! Still, she should get her just desserts.
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  • From ANON - Myliana on January 25, 2007
    I love the interaction between Paula and Ky'an. I think it is so beautiful. Love that he wants to be her first and only. Perfect. I Absolutely love this story and can not wait for you to update it. Amazing writing
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  • From ANON - Crazytail on January 25, 2007
    PERFECTION. That was AWESOME. I love it that he wants her to say what they both know is true. I also love it that he wants to be her first and only. You are amazing Blu! NEXT CHAPTER!
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  • From ANON - Bee on January 24, 2007
    Thank goodness that you are still allowing reviews from people who are not logged in! I would be very sad if I couldn't tell you how awesome that chapter was! So Ky'an wants her to choose him to be her first and only one. I like that! It's much more clever then him forcing his way with her. And the last line was fantastic. I cannot wait until the next chapter! And I cannot wait for Paula to have Ky'an's child. I think he would be so happy and very protective of her.

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