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Reviews for The Viper's bite

By : Malestorm
  • From on March 22, 2007
    You are a wonderful writer. I loved this chapter and I know that the Se'tra will be on the warpath probably from a distance while Paula and Ky'an are getting to know each other. Please do not go away again or let this groove fade you are amazing at this keep it up.
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  • From Payden on March 22, 2007
    That was lovely as usual. You are awesome Blu!

    I forsee a green eyed monster with a blade hunting for Paula. I also see her floating outside the ship if she does. What is Se'tra to do?
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  • From ANON - Symetrical break on March 21, 2007
    I soooo glad to see you are back....and back with STYLE. I know some writers have to get into a mood or groove to write. I hope you stay in this groove and it shakes ya because it is GOOD.
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  • From ANON - conncoll on March 21, 2007
    thank you sooo much for updating...ive been waiting for this for a long time...more soooooonn!!!!
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  • From JulieL on March 21, 2007
    I'm with alot of the people above. I can't wait to see what Se'tra does when she finds out. Something evil I bet.


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  • From Greyson on March 21, 2007
    Beautifully Done.
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  • From Verbatim on March 21, 2007
    Well worth the wait!! You did an excellent job. Beautiful.

    I can not wait to see Se'tra's reaction to this development. I just know she will do something to harm Paula and I hope Jake'her has her floating outside the ship minus her head.
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  • From Summersand on March 21, 2007
    I will religiously follow this story from now on. No more having to read two chapters to catch up. It is too AWESOME for that kind of stuff. This chapter was Superb Just perfect no talking just feeling. Loved it.
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  • From ANON - Della Bear on March 21, 2007
    I thought you were never going to continue with this story....oh how wrong I was.

    This is Awesome. I love that no words were written just what they were doing and what they were feeling. GReat stuff. I want to know more, Will they have children?How many ? What will Se'tra do to try and hurt Paula? I have a lot more but I have to read it again. Della
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on March 21, 2007
    Very nicely done! Now that the first encounter is over, I wonder what will happen... I can't wait to see! =)
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  • From ANON - INC on March 21, 2007
    Se'tra is gnawing her arm off because she lost her Ky'an. Girl... that was *sighs* I need you to write some more while I print this out to read later. You fan INC
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  • From ANON - Coreena on March 21, 2007
    LONG AWAITED CHAPTER. AHHHHHH MAN HOW I LOVE THIS STORY! You have me hooked. I am yours to command. PLease go on.
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  • From Amari on March 21, 2007
    I LOVE the way you write. This was breathtaking I think. Please don't let us rush you to update. You know when you are ready and it is always perfect. MORE
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  • From Edison on March 21, 2007
    *Shudders* I want babies.... lots and lots of babies. He will be so protective of her it ain't funny. You are awesome girly.
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  • From ANON - Crazytail on March 19, 2007
    PLEASE update.....Please
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