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Reviews for The Viper's bite

By : Malestorm
  • From ANON - evoD on August 27, 2006
    FANTASTIC WORK! Ky'an is so sexy and damn sure of himself I love that! I love this chapter Se'tra is a bitch to me. Maybe she will sleep with him for old time sake. PLEASE! I must have more I can see Paula messing up and all sorts of things happening betwwen her and Ky'an MORE !
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  • From ANON - INC on August 27, 2006
    THIS IS MAGNIFICENT. I hung on everyword I love it . Ky'an is so bad and damn sexy Ahh I love him. Paula cracks me up."I talk toomuch and have bad table manners." LOL I can see them getting together. Hell he wanted to. Se'tra sounds like a gold digger trying to make Ky'an jealous with Grails. I like Grails he seems like a likable Yuajta and Ky'an does not seem to have any dislike for him. I love this sstory Will Paula and Se'tra have words. Beautiful writing it is flowing and gripping keep it coming INC
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  • From ANON - Viewerfinder on August 26, 2006
    More ,More,More That is how much I LOVE it UPdate
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  • From Retribution on August 26, 2006
    please continue this looks like it will really good
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  • From Payden on August 26, 2006
    You got something here that I think is SPectacular with this plot OH BOY this can be SWEET!!!! You deserve all the reviews youhave so far please update to night I'll be waiting!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 26, 2006
    This little story of your Bluflame is SWEET I can not wait for Se'tra to meet Paula she sounds like she will be a handful.UPDATE!
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  • From lovingall on August 26, 2006
    So here you are This is so good You better update TODAY!! I love this plot you got Revenfge with an omman female oh the claws will be out.
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  • From ANON - SafeHaven on August 26, 2006
    More please this is soooo good. Love the Plot,Characters, and the story.
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  • From Parts on August 26, 2006
    Great start I love it BLu! You got to keep this going the plot alone says that a male trying to make someone pay for dumping them. Get to writing
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  • From ANON - Kraven on August 26, 2006
    This is excellent. Ky'an is going all out getting Se'tra's dislikes and bringing them back to stare her in the face.More please
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  • From ANON - INC on August 26, 2006
    You must continue very soon with this it is AWESOME INC
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on August 26, 2006
    This is very good. I especially like the big ass in the air line. That'd be me definitely. Please continue I need to see the jealousy and Ky'an needs to touch those breasts again. Love Ky'an.
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  • From ANON - Nah on August 25, 2006
    Your story is good and it has an interesting plot. I hope to see you update and doing well. Thanks for posting your fic.
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  • From ANON - The_Malestrom on August 25, 2006
    I Like this it is looking really realy good Bluflame please next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Kae'She on August 25, 2006
    aww that is so cool i really really really like this opening this is so cool i can not wait for the next chapter cause it is such a good story i am really entertained although this is very interesting i want to see what happens and what happens
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