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Reviews for The Viper's bite

By : Malestorm
  • From wydow on August 11, 2007
    I am in love with this story. I have read it so many times since your absence I can not count.

    I think you are an amazing author that knows how to get the reader excited. None of your chapters carry that lag factor and I think each one is brilliant and easy flows into the next one.

    This chapter was awesome and I am chomping at the bit for more. Your are a marvelous writer. If you did not know it, then I am telling you. Even though you do not update regularly, when you do it is spectacular.

    Keep at it let the muse take over again soon. Spider.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 11, 2007
    Love to see you writing again. This was excellent.

    I do love the way you built to this point. I absolutely love the fullness of all your characters. You are doind a masterful job with this story.Not many story can keep me this anxious about an update like this one. It has me hooked.
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  • From Mackrel on August 10, 2007
    This was marvelous. I love this story.

    I Love Ky'an and Paula with a passoin. It is the way you express them through your writing. You are great. Keep this ALIVE. I love it too much to see it fade away.
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  • From karmaxp on August 10, 2007
    Simply Awesome.

    I love how you compose your story. This is my favorite fanficition.

    I love your character progression along with your plotline. You are so good at this that I am envious.

    I am a rabid fan of your work and I am all too happy to be a spectator and just read your work whenever you have time to update. Lorna
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  • From Grizzly on August 09, 2007
    Perfect and thrilling as always. I am so happy to see you back.

    btw Towards the end of the story you have the word 'were' that I know should not be there. I don't think you will receive any punishment if you fix it. If you do not I know what you meant. The story is still Awesome!
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  • From ANON - vibe on August 09, 2007
    This is one hell of an awesome story you have written. It is trully amazing. Keep with this need to write and update again.
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  • From ANON - Novicegirl on August 09, 2007
    Long time no see and you come back with AMAZING STUFF.

    This story has no equal to me. I love every single one of your characters and their personalities. You are a master and this story is Awesome! I will be waiting for much, much, more.
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  • From ANON - LovyDovy on August 09, 2007
    Viper didn't waist no time at all. Sexy and touching. Down with Setra.

    So you have a life! It has been too long.Kidding really. More please.
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  • From CLTexas84 on August 09, 2007
    finally updated!!! that was amazing....update again soon!!
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  • From ANON - Lillybugs on August 09, 2007
    I love all your stories. However,this, is my favorite hands down.

    Every chapter is a step to the next. The flow of your work is flawless. This story has everything a story needs to be a remarkable piece of writing. Please continue to the next step. Lillybugs

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  • From Harbor on August 08, 2007
    I love Ky'an and Paula you have made them so full of life they could be real. I love the way you have constructed this story for the 12 chapters you have so far. This is trully The BEST Predator fanfiction I have read. SH
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  • From ANON - crazytail on August 08, 2007
    There is always one certainty with this story...it is always awesome.
    This chapter just adds to this Masterpiece of beautiful writing. Keep them flowing Blu
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  • From laica on August 08, 2007
    love i`t great story
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  • From lovingall on August 08, 2007
    This is so unexpected.

    I love how your work progresses along. This is marvelous. Well worth waiting for.

    I love that I feel the emotions between Ky'an and Paula. I absolutely LOVE them. Your ability to evoke emotions and feelings from me with your characters is unequal to me. I absolutely LOVE this Romance/Drama/Action tale you have me hooked on.
    Excellent writing
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  • From ANON - evoD on August 08, 2007
    This was a well thought out and written chapter. Excellent job! Let that muse take over more often. I understand life and kids come first and I am happy to see ANYTHING from you. This was Awesome as said before. WRITE AGAIN I will be waiting!
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