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Reviews for The Viper's bite

By : Malestorm
  • From Airporter on August 28, 2006
    PLease next chapter Please!!
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  • From ANON - Walkingpapers on August 28, 2006
    Well I guess he can make her want him. I hope he does because they would be perfect together. This a MUST READ Bluflame I need more chapters
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on August 27, 2006
    Ky'an is a wicked sexy male. Bragging that he can make Paula want him. I bet you his right. I want him already. Keep it up. Need to see what Se'tra does.
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  • From Verbatim on August 27, 2006
    YES!!! Totally AWesome I am into this story it is fresh and Awesome Please update soon like Tomorrow!
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  • From Carelessl on August 27, 2006
    You have a amazing and Sexy story going here and I want more. I love the characters and the PLOT is AWESOME MORE!
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  • From Amari on August 27, 2006
    See what did I tell you your Sexy writing hand just kicked in I love Both your main characters andKy'an is dripping so bad the place is going to go up!! Great chapter totally exciting, loved it. Please post again soon.
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  • From ANON - Della Bear on August 27, 2006
    I am so hooked on this story and I am really looking forward to every single chapter that you post. HOt Damn Ky'an is sexy
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  • From karmaxp on August 27, 2006
    If ...you... do ..not ...put up another chapter soon I will beg you until you do. This is so Good Blu. You have to give me more. Ky'an is so damn sexy he is dripping. Paula knows it, she will help him and I hope you know he falls for her in the process ,How can you not it is PAULA! Loving this terribly darling
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  • From ANON - SyJen on August 27, 2006
    LOVE IT I Can not wait for your next chapter!! PLease let it be soon
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  • From ANON - Novicegirl on August 27, 2006
    Oh my that was so good I am going to be reading this story everyday until you update again. How can she not love him.I love him
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  • From ANON - WTLM on August 27, 2006
    AWWW this is Fantstic I love it I hope they get together they are perfect. Please more this is Awesome
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  • From ANON - vanthegreat on August 27, 2006
    Oh yeah That was Excellent I hope she LOVES him HE is so damn sexy and confident. Please update again !!!
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  • From on August 27, 2006
    I hope they GET TOGETHER THEY ARE HOTT!@!! This is reallyreally reallyreally AWESOME NEXT!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 27, 2006
    Ky'an Ky'an Ky'an getting everything you ex lover hates is a very good way to get back at her and bring her to her knees. I love him with Paula I can only see explosions when they are together. I love this story I think it is DELICIOUS!!! next chapter
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  • From ANON - missy on August 27, 2006
    ohhh.that was really good. hope she gives in and learns to love him.
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