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Reviews for The Viper's bite

By : Malestorm
  • From ANON - INC on August 29, 2006
    Did I tell I was hooked on this before? Well, I am and I want more of these two. Se'tra will crack , but I think she will do everything she can to ruin Ky'an's revenge. I don't know I think Paula can do that by herself Love this NEXT CHAPTER!!!
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  • From lovingall on August 29, 2006
    The Plot is Awesome and I love your characters. Ky'an is kind of rigid and Damn sexy Paula is funny and beautiful just the sort of girl to bring him out of his shell, if Se'tra does not turn him back to her. I hope Paula learns to love him and he in return realizes that he loves her. Love stories always make me happy! I WILL BE READING THIS CONSTANTLY!!!
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  • From Harbor on August 29, 2006
    I know You are writing Chapter three right? If youa re not please do it ASAP. This story is Fabulous and I widh to read more about Ky'an and Paula.
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  • From ANON - lil'bit on August 29, 2006
    I have a feeling every chapter will be filled with Awesome writing I love this and I hope you update today please
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  • From Allure on August 29, 2006
    Hey my fellow cartoonie, I have to say you are doing alright by my standards this is sweet to me, I love it and want more chapters.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 29, 2006
    This was excellent I love the plot and the characters. Ky'an and Paula are Hott together I can not wait for more please hurry
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  • From Parts on August 29, 2006
    This is Awesome BLu you need to continue it TODAY!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 29, 2006
    This is definately a reader for me Good work!
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  • From ANON - Deverwood on August 29, 2006
    Oh, I really love this story and I eagerly wait for the nexy chapter please Hurry so I can read it before I have to go to work!
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  • From Edison on August 29, 2006
    I love this that chapter was really really good. Se'tra is a gold digger. I can not believe she thinks she can just sleep with Ky'an again to make him want him. Ky'an does not look like the type to fall for that. He is DAMN sexy Love that. Paula is perfect for him. I hope she ends up loving him. Ajax
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  • From wydow on August 28, 2006
    This is trully awesome Blu I need another chpater to get th full affect though. I love Ky'an if he ain't dripping Sex eveywhere I don't know what is . Paula is perfect for him I love it!!
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  • From Greyson on August 28, 2006
    Excellent!! You need to update this this week I need my Ky'an Paula fix. I love the Plot Se'tra sounds like she is full of hersel. I Hate those type of people it has to be ten times worse in a yautja. Continue
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  • From Payden on August 28, 2006
    I am waiting right now for you to update agagin I will not post until you have at least Four chapters of this Hott and BEautiful story poasted. I love it so please get to writing
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  • From ANON - Viewerfinder on August 28, 2006
    This is great Please update
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  • From Mitresslove on August 28, 2006
    This is a marvelous story and I can not wait for you to update more Blu. I love Ky'an and Paula like coffee,cream,and sugar. Please hurry and update this is that good.
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