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Reviews for The Viper's bite

By : Malestorm
  • From ANON - Viewerfinder on August 30, 2006
    I need about 30 more chapters of this to get the feel of it down. Just kiddign but you can write 30 more. I Love it!!
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  • From Payden on August 30, 2006
    HOTT STUFF. If these two need to get together Bluflame. If he thinks Se'tra is above Paula well just you wait!!! LOL Ky'an is too good for Se'tra what the hell was he thinking to be with her. MORE this is AMAZING!!
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  • From Summersand on August 30, 2006
    Awesome! Awesome! Awesome!!! I love this story please have more soon PLEASE!
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  • From lovingall on August 30, 2006
    I love this story and anxiously await for more of this beautiful story Blu! You are holding it down with much stlye.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 30, 2006
    You just keep writing amazing chapters don't you? This is trully becoming my favorite story in this section . I so Love it. I wnat and CRAVE more. I WILL be reading it again so post on!
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  • From ANON - Walkingpapers on August 30, 2006
    Oh Man! This is sooo Good I have to read it again after I run my errands. I love your writing.It is so Sexy and Fun and beautiful Keep it up!! It makes me Happy!
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  • From ANON - WTLM on August 30, 2006
    I am so obsessed with this story you can not miss a week of updating. It is soooo well done and awesome. I can not begin to tell you what will happen if you do not finish it. You are a amazing writer Bluflame
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  • From ANON - evoD on August 30, 2006
    Trully wonderful Story. I find myself reading it over and over and I will today. I love PAula nad kY'an oh They are perfect and HOTT! Love the way they are with each other. I hope she makes him take back every word he has said about Se'tra being better than her. He wants it!!
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  • From ANON - Bee on August 29, 2006
    Bluflame! What a lovely story you have here! I love Paula, that girl has spunk! I love how she keeps challenging Ky'an about his sexual might...cracks me up....even though Ky'an can get pretty scary when he's mad! Oh and what's up with "She is far above you Ooman."....I think Paula needs to show him that she is alllllll woman...ooman or not! hahahahaha
    This is a great story, I love how you made it a bit different with Paula not being a willing love monkey....he needs to work for her love! Love it!
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on August 29, 2006
    I love the "you know you want to try it" line. I can't wait to see what happens at the dinner. I hope Viper and Paula step it up and do more than just wanting to try it.
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  • From ANON - missy on August 29, 2006
    loved this story...hope there is more revenge in store FOR Se’tra, she's such a bitch. Ky’an almost seems too nice.
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  • From Mitresslove on August 29, 2006
    I had ro read it twice that is how much I really love this story Blu. I am so glad you posted it. You know I love all your stuff and the way you write it. Please continue just for me!!!!
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  • From wydow on August 29, 2006
    DELICIOUS, I am ready for the next chapter now. Ky'an is so Sexy can I borrow him because you know you want it. The Alien Nachos thing was LOL MORE MORE MORE I DEMAND IT
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  • From Amari on August 29, 2006
    Come you know you want it. Oh yes I do!!! That was HOTT and SEXY I LOVED IT. Dinner with Se'tra is something I can not miss!!! Fanstatic story!!!
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  • From ANON - Deverwood on August 29, 2006
    That was SWEET!!! I love these two.I hope he does not let her leave EVER!!! Thanks and MORE
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