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Reviews for The Viper's bite

By : Malestorm
  • From ANON - Stone2fire on August 31, 2006
    What an Awesome story. I love the plot and the characters! You have a gem in the making here keep going and I will be watching for this!!!!
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  • From Greyson on August 31, 2006
    This is marvelous. I hope Ky'an ignores Se'tra tomorrow but I don't think so and Paula will be forced to do something. I love this story and I want to continue so start writing.
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  • From Airporter on August 31, 2006
    Personally, I think this is one of the best stories on this page I love it the characters, the writing, thier personality have depth. The PLOT is AWESOME! It is a love story that I can not wait to read more of. Beautiful job!
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  • From Carelessl on August 31, 2006
    I love this story because it is so refreshing and flows like a waterfall. Awesome writing to the point and not all that over descriptive stuff that makes a piece of work long winded and boring. I also love it because it is a love story between two species , well I hope so I love Ky'an and Paula "You know you want it" Update please
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  • From ANON - lil'bit on August 31, 2006
    I love reading good stuf in the morning. I love Ky'an and Paula I can not wait until he starts to realize that what he is doing is wrong but Paula is SOOOOO right please continue this is right out of a romance novel. I LOVE IT!!!
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  • From ANON - Novicegirl on August 31, 2006
    What a Awesome story to read to make your day seem not as bad. This is so refreshing a Love story. I love it and I wnat you to continue so I can have more Awesome stories chapters to read.
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  • From Verbatim on August 30, 2006
    Oh yeah Ky'an is not a jerk. HE is Sexy and stuck on revenge at the moment but he;ll come out of that ...Hopefully Paula will help.
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  • From Verbatim on August 30, 2006
    He wants her or he is just needing some female companionship. He just wanted Se'tra to be happy but she could not appreciate what he had. Paula is trying hard to go home. I love her no back down attitude. I can not wait for dinner w/ Se'tra. Love this
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  • From ANON - vanthegreat on August 30, 2006
    Love this story. It has all the makings of a romance novel only with predators. I love LOVE STORIES.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 30, 2006
    Paula is not going to be easy for Ky'an to make want him. I love her and Ky'an together. I hope he gets over his anger with Se'tra and moves on before Pual begins to want him. I love this story.
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  • From karmaxp on August 30, 2006
    Ahh Blu! This is spectacular! I love Puala and someday she will learn that he does not like being challenged about his sexual prowess.LOL Maybe he will show her a thing or two.LOL Alien nachos LOL LOL.

    I hope you do know that a few of the fellas and I have decided not to post until you have Four chapters. Oh just me, Kraven, Kraven_Spider, Ajax, Malie and SafeHaven has not returned her email but she'll join us. Jacobs started this mess blame her she thinks your story is AWESOME and wants it to get all the exposure it deserves.Isn't she sickening nice. EWWWWW
    But your story is Awesome so no biggie
    p.s Some of us get time to write the next chpater :)
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  • From Parts on August 30, 2006
    Ky'an likes her I mean when the body starts to tingle from someone laughing things AINT gonna be the same. I love Paula and I don't care if Ky'an used one female against another Se'tra did the same with Grails it's called Karma. But I hope Ky'an's plan has a happy ending Oh Please I love this alien love story!!!
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  • From prairiefire on August 30, 2006
    Ugh. What a male. Use one female to tick off another one. Jerk. Even if the gold-digger deserves it, Paula doesn't deserve to be used as a pawn. Especially since pawns are usually the first to be sacrificed.
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  • From ANON - Della Bear on August 30, 2006
    Lovin' it more and more with each chapter you produce in this masterpiece I love that Paula does not like him in the sexual way yet that requires work on his part . HE , however, is pretty good at making her want it.! MORE!
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  • From on August 30, 2006
    I love this story so much I had to go back to the beginning and read it over t=just to marvel at the flow and how it is written I totally love it.I want to see how it turns out Bluflame so write on!
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