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Reviews for The Viper's bite

By : Malestorm
  • From on September 02, 2006
    OH YEAH! I think I love them!!! THey are HOTT! You got something here Bluflame that is so AWESOME. It is my favorite and I ALWAYS look for it. Keep it coming yourself
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  • From ANON - Deverwood on September 02, 2006
    So Awesome this chapter! You made my day Bluflame. This story is the BEST!
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  • From ANON - Viewerfinder on September 02, 2006
    This chapter was Awesome and brilliant. Love Ky'an and Paula they SIZZLE together. I love the romantic feeling the love story that I can see in here. I can also see pain coming for Se'tra if she loses Grails too. Next chapter please
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  • From Granite on September 02, 2006
    Heck Yeah I think I will read and review some more if you continue to write like this Loving this like chocolate ice cream. As said before, love the plot, the characters ,and the writing!!!!!

    Stone2fire

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  • From ANON - Anon on September 02, 2006
    I love Ky'an and Paula they should MATE! I love the romance and that she is NOT all over him. He will have some work to do to make convinve her to love him. I love him He is DAmn Sexy!! Se'tra could lose everything if she is not careful. Grails has his eyes on Mya !!! I love this!
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  • From ANON - INC on September 02, 2006
    Beautiful and Sexy. This story gets smokes with greatness. It is Perfect Bluflame I don't want it to end. AWESOME chapter!!!!
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  • From Summersand on September 02, 2006
    My labor day reading materail! This was BEAUTIFUL AND SEXY!!!! I love the length PERFECT!! You have made my day with this beautiful writing you seem to put into every chapter, Ky'an and Paula are so hott!!! Love the dinner nachos LOL MORE MORE.!!!!
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  • From ANON - Walkingpapers on September 02, 2006
    I want more of this sexy, lovely story of yours. I was wrapped up in every word of this. I love the writing and this story. It is a work of art.
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  • From ANON - Della Bear on September 02, 2006
    What an AWESOME Chapter. Long and Beautiful. I love it. Ky'an wants Paula and that is interfering with his plan,but I don't think he will care as much about hurting Se'tra as he once did. He wants Paula because she trusts him. I love the banter with Mya nd Se'tra I cracked up. Se'tra had better watch out or she will lose Grails. This is AWESOME More
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  • From ANON - bodydouble on September 02, 2006
    Oh this is so beautiful I love the romance. It is a classic storyline. Oh I can't wait for more this will be a HOTT one beautifully written.
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  • From Edison on September 01, 2006
    Love the chapter! I can not wait for dinner, Will he forget his reason for having Paula there is to get revenge. Oh I must know. This is Awesome Bluflame. ROMANCE YAUTJA SYTLE
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  • From Allure on September 01, 2006
    I can not wait for you to update this. It is so Awesome Blu! You know what you are doing. Hey update SHOC Please!
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  • From Granite on August 31, 2006
    I forgot to log in before But if you ever star a mailing list:)
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  • From Harbor on August 31, 2006
    Blu I Must say that I love Ky'an and Paula's reactions to each other. He is sooooo sexy and she is too. This work has its humor and its pure dripping sex momnets. I absolutely love it. This to me could be the greatest of stories when you finish it. I will be waiting for chapter four along with others.

    Hey Ajax and I need a posting buddy care to join us.
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  • From ANON - Cara on August 31, 2006
    Paula is so funny. Interesting character.
    I can see the makings of a very intricate, sexy, and downright hot story.
    Please keep it up.
    It's definetly a great story so far.
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