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Reviews for The Viper's bite

By : Malestorm
  • From Parts on September 04, 2006
    Ky'an is so damn sexy!!!! Oh how can Paula not want that. I guess he will have to make her want it. AWESOME chapter!!
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  • From Edison on September 04, 2006
    I think I will have to steal Ky'an from you for a long while. HE and Aid'ian can hang out and talk. I LOVE THIS!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Cara on September 03, 2006
    Yaay thanks for updating!
    That was very hot at the end. Ky'an is so sexy lol.
    MORE MORE please.
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  • From lovingall on September 03, 2006
    Can it get any better Blu. Ky'an is so dripping sex. I bet he can make her want him. make her squeal with it LOL. I am HOOKEDDUG IN WITH ALL TEN FINGERS AND TEN TOES!!!!
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  • From Mitresslove on September 03, 2006
    I have found another cover to cover read. Ky'an and Paula are steamy. I love them and I love this STORY NEXT CHAPTER
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  • From Payden on September 03, 2006
    Ky'an and Paula are SEXY And oh boy the things he could do to her MORE!!!!
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  • From Greyson on September 03, 2006
    Perfection and beauty in every word I loved it!!1
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on September 03, 2006
    Ky'an is a fanny teaser. Get a girl all worked up then stop, does he know what that does to a girl?

    I hope he kicks San'i's ass into the afterlife. Do not make a challenge to a Yautja when you're half, sorry fully pissed.

    I think Ky'an could make anyone want him and I hope he keeps Paula. Keep goin' Blu I need more, pretty please, I'm down on my knees.
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  • From on September 03, 2006
    I hope she LOVES him as MUCH AS I DO!! AWESOME CHAPTER! I know I am yelling :)
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  • From ANON - evoD on September 03, 2006
    Ky'an is so sexy I can not see how Paula can resist him for long. Heck I can't I lik e Grails and he has his eye on Mya and if Se'tra is not careful he is gone! I love this story and I am so glad you update every teo or three days this is AWESOME!
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  • From Amari on September 03, 2006
    If you continue this way I will be addicted...okay I am already this is marvelous Paula and Ky'an are Awesome Love this keep it coming Bluflame!!
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  • From ANON - Novicegirl on September 03, 2006
    This is going to be my favorite predator story I just know it. This chapter was So Sexy and AWSEOME. I was hanging on every word. LOVE IT!!
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  • From Airporter on September 03, 2006
    Ky'an and Paula are smokin' I love this couple. This chpater was beautiful and sexy. Love it all!!
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  • From ANON - lil'bit on September 03, 2006
    AWESOME!!!!! GIVE MW MORE PLEASE
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  • From ANON - Lina on September 03, 2006
    WOW!!! :)
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