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Reviews for The Viper's bite

By : Malestorm
  • From Greyson on September 10, 2006
    That was Spectacular Blu!! Oh Ky'an is so Yummy and telling her she was home was like an AWESOME line. Grails and Mya togetherI love; but I think Se'tra has wind of it and I do not think she will let Grails go without a fight. I am waiting for what you got next.
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  • From wydow on September 09, 2006
    I love this this is AWESOME! Love Paula and Ky'an the are electric in print. HOTTT I think the word is. Please email us when you are ready this will be AWESOME! Bid Bad Wolf versus The Viper bite. I must say Kraven likes your chances and so do I. You are a GREAT WRITER!!!!
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  • From ANON - Bee on September 08, 2006
    wow that was intense...i love this game between paula an ka'yan. I have a feeling that Grails is going to leave setra for Mya...he totally should! Mya seems really cool and sweet. But Grail better have serious intentions towards Mya! Oh I love your story, keep the chapters coming!
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  • From Payden on September 06, 2006
    It will be based purely on hits and The_ Malestrom said she would keep track. SO k=no cheating!!! LOL Okay now get back to writing isn't this exciting a war!!
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  • From Payden on September 06, 2006
    You know that you called down the thunder speech from Tombstone that is what I want to say here but I can not remember how it goes, but you know what I am saying. Well it seems that SafeHaven , Ajax and You Bluflame have thrown done the mallet in the post wars versus Me, Kraven_spider and Lorna. We matched it up according to reviews. Ha'lo's Haven versus One way Ticket, Big Bad Wolf versus The Viper's bite, ( SWEET) And Aftermath versus Aid'ian's Doctrine. Should be one hell of a post war. Hey when you are ready just email Kraven. Love the Story get to writing.!
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  • From Harbor on September 06, 2006
    Please carry on and QUICKLY this is gripping and SEXY HOTT!!!!!
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  • From Verbatim on September 05, 2006
    Man Oh Man That was Marvelous and Hott More please post the next chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - Koala on September 05, 2006
    I'm completely captivated by this story. I hope there will be a new chapter soon! Might I make a small request? Could you please use proper spacing for paragraphs etc.? It would make the story easier to follow. I got a little lost a few times. But, all in all, this is an excellent story. I can't wait for more!!
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  • From ANON - WTLM on September 05, 2006
    AWESOME CHAPTER!!!! Please continue with more PLEASE!!!
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  • From ANON - Body double on September 05, 2006
    Ahhh yes get to the nitty gritty I bet he could make her do WHATEVER!!! AWSEOME !!!
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  • From ANON - scarslady13 on September 05, 2006
    HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From karmaxp on September 05, 2006
    I want Ky'an and I am going to steal him. WHAT A STORY CONTINUE!!!!!
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  • From Carelessl on September 05, 2006
    Shiver me tingles. You keep this going this is AMAZING
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 04, 2006
    Please CONTINUE!! THIS IS AMAZING !!!
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  • From Allure on September 04, 2006
    That was HOTT. Ky'an knows he is sexy don't he LOL MORE !!!!
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