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Reviews for The Viper's bite

By : Malestorm
  • From Verbatim on September 14, 2006
    Paula is not goin to like him too much now is she? He will just have to work on his people skills because they are too hott to go away. Grails and Mya I like this but I do not think Se'tra is real comfortable with it. I love this give me more
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  • From ANON - Viewerfinder on September 12, 2006
    Kick San'i's ass and then I want to see if Grails wants Mya for her or just sex. I think he wants her as his mate. Se'tra is not his mate they are just seeing each other, maybe not even that. Ky'an and Paula are still Hott and I want more!
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  • From Mitresslove on September 12, 2006
    Se'tra will be on the warpath against the daughter of her enemy if Grails continues to pull away from her. Now that Paula knows she is HOME Will she ever grow to love Ky'an. I still think he is HOTT!!! Bring on the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 12, 2006
    Awesome! Need more
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  • From on September 12, 2006
    I love this story and I hope Paula survives aboard the ship. Se'tra is on to Grails and I don't think she is going to let him go without a fight. Please More!! This is excellent
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  • From Granite on September 11, 2006
    I love this I forsee rocky, bumpy roads ahead with maybe more fights ahead. This is beautiful and Sexy please give me more.
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  • From ANON - WTLM on September 11, 2006
    YOu have got to have another chapter I wnat to see what Paula does now that she knows she can not leave and what Se'tra does because she could lose Grails to the daughter of her hated enemy. Oh yes this is AWESOME MORE!
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  • From ANON - Della Bear on September 11, 2006
    Paula wont like that. I can see the heartache coming unless se'tra starts acting up which I think she will and I can 't wait for more! Great chapter keep it coming!
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  • From ANON - INC on September 11, 2006
    WONDERFUL and intriguing. Ky'an's line you are home was classic you are not going anywhere stuff. Paula will just have to cause him heartache I guess. Love them. Grails and Mya will be perfect if you can get Se'tra out of the way. I love this beautiful story next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Walkingpapers on September 11, 2006
    I have been waiting for an update this is Fanstatic. I love the hitch in the possible relationship between Ky'an and Paula he will have to overcome that to get her. Grails and Mya I lOVE it. Se'tra needs to be with Rah'fi there is a nightmare made in evil. Write more I love this.
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  • From ANON - lil'bit on September 11, 2006
    I need more I want to see how she reacts to life with Ky'an. They are awesome together. Love the attraction between them. MORE MORE!!!
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  • From ANON - bodydouble on September 11, 2006
    Oh how I love the way you write I love Sexy Ky'an and I hope Paula accepts the fact that thisis her home. They SIZZLE TOGETHER. Grails is playing with fire now that Se'tra knows he is not satisfied with her and is looking elsewhere. I see some potential problems. This is awesome and gripping please continue!!!
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  • From Summersand on September 11, 2006
    Ky'an is laying down the law. I hope Paula does nto hate him too much and learns to love him. I love HIM.!!!!! Grails should be carfeul around Mya so Se'tra does not get any ideas about Mya. Although , I think she has some ides I don't hink she will think it is serious especially if she is trying to get Ky'an back. I LOVE THIS CONTINUE
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  • From wydow on September 10, 2006
    Ky'an's last line made me shiver. He will find it not easy tomake her feel at home. Love the romance aspect, Grails and Mya a must . i see Se'tra gearing up to take out Paula and Mya. Awesome writing. thanks for saying it alright to do the edits and by all means return to your place on top We bow to the flame
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  • From ANON - Deverwood on September 10, 2006
    There is no end to your writing I loved this. Ky'an and Paula So good. He is going to have to work for her!! I can not WAIT!!!! MORE MORE MORE!!!!
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