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Reviews for The Viper's bite

By : Malestorm
  • From ANON - Anon on September 26, 2006
    I don't know about Paula but I would stay. LOL Love this story like chocolate cake HMMMMMMM!!!!
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  • From ANON - Prairiefire on September 24, 2006
    OK. So maybe Kyan isn't a complete jerk. If he is really falling for Paula I guess I can forgive him for threatening to send her back to the Xenos. Now, what is Paula gonna do? She still wants to go home doesn't she?
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  • From ANON - Myliana on September 23, 2006
    I am so lucky two of my three favorite stories have updated now I want more LOL. I love your characters and writing. This is AWESOME!
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  • From Edison on September 21, 2006
    I love this story. You are an awesome, amazing, Writer Bluflame keep it going I will be here.
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  • From Payden on September 20, 2006
    I find this story to be lovely and beautiful. Bluflame, I need more. I love all your characters and their demeanors please update soon I will be waiting anxiously!
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  • From ANON - Angela H on September 20, 2006
    Please bring on the next chapter I am waiting this is AWESOME I love it.
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  • From lovingall on September 18, 2006
    Oh sooky sooky now!! Oh boyfriend is telling it like it is, She is home I lOVE THIS MORE
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  • From ANON - Bee on September 17, 2006
    “Please let me go home.”
    He lowered his lips to her ear and whispered in her language. “You are home.”
    LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From karmaxp on September 15, 2006
    Ky'an and Paula are Hott he will just have to make her want him I guessLOL. What will Se'tra do fight for Grails or try to get Ky'an to love her again and lose Grails completely. Decisions for and Bitch. Please bring on the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - evoD on September 14, 2006
    I think Ky'an is still angry at Se'tra and is taking it out on Paula by saying she is home. He does not want to lose his prize just because he wants her he still wnats his plan to work. I hope Paula shows him differently. Need more write now
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  • From Parts on September 14, 2006
    I need the next chapter to see what Paula does and if Se'tra straightens Grails out for wanting a serving wench LOL MORE!!!!
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  • From Amari on September 14, 2006
    Ky'an letting her know early that she is not leaving ,so guess she should adjust NOt I can see Paula causing such havoc for our Ky'an. I can't wait More!
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  • From ANON - Novicegirl on September 14, 2006
    Paula accept the fact you will never leave there and make him work for what he wants he looks like he is game. Love it more
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  • From Allure on September 14, 2006
    It is just a phase Paula, he will lighten up but you will have to help him. She can do it with her bad table manners and talking too much I have faith in her MORE!!!
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  • From Airporter on September 14, 2006
    You are home Well okay. I think this is where some heart ache will begin. I hope not I can not see Paula being down for long with Se'tra roaming around. I look for more of this soon I need it.
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