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Reviews for The Viper's bite

By : Malestorm
  • From Amari on September 11, 2007
    I can read this over and over again because it is so absorbing of my attention. I can not wait for the next chapter. I love it more even if you do not update often I really do not care because what you have so far is so awesome it soothes the pain when you are gone. Keep this coming Leedar
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  • From RedWine on August 30, 2007
    Wonderful writing! I think this story is heaven. I love it so. You are an excellent writer I love ALL your work! FAB
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  • From Mitresslove on August 29, 2007
    As usual this is awesome. I love it and I hope you update soon!. This is the best.
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  • From ANON - Coreena on August 28, 2007
    Absolutely beautiful. I love this story everytime I see it. I do not care how long I have to wait for an update it is WORTH it!. Hott stuff!
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  • From ANON - Symetrical break on August 25, 2007
    Golly awesome writing. I loved every moment of it! Ky'an and Paula are my new couple. Please go on.
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  • From Softly on August 17, 2007
    Excellent Chapter.
    You do know how to come back with substance. I have been waiting for a while but it was WELL worth it. This was one of your best yet and I am waiting for more. I love this story!
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  • From on August 16, 2007
    This was Beautiful , sexy and awesome all rolled into one amazing chapter.
    Look, I don't care when you update just as long as you do. This story is the best Bravo!
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  • From Allure on August 15, 2007
    Amazing!

    I so in love with your story. It is perfect. I do hope Ky'an protects Paula from what ever Setra is planning. I do hope that Paula is PREGO! That would be awesome. You are awesome. NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE
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  • From ANON - Bee on August 15, 2007
    oh my god. Simply beautiful. I love this story. I can't wait to read the mating of Mya and Grails.....
    Favorite line: "It mattered that a long, unbreakable black piece of material attached to his wrist and hers meant that they belonged to each other forever." How beautiful is that?!? Ky'an will never let her go. I hope Paula is pregnant!! I think Ky'an will be an awesome father. Can't wait until your next chapter!!!!!!

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  • From ANON - Myliana on August 14, 2007
    Oh, I really loved this chapter. It was hott and glorious. I love that your characters are not perfect and sometimes have the wrong mindset as Ky'an did to kidnap Paula in the first place. Paula probably felt that someone finally wanted her and did not put up much of a fight. She told him that much after she was hurt. I suspect that with all their flaws and problems they will find love together. I hope so I do LOVE them together and the way you write them. Next chapter please
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  • From Deeplove on August 13, 2007
    Welcome back and not a moment too late.

    I do not care when you update just as lons as you do. This was awesome. Your writing always leaves me wanting more. You are awesome and I love ALL of your stories.



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  • From ANON - Deverwood on August 13, 2007
    I am so glad you are back with us.

    I adore your story and I check this section daily for your updates.

    This chapter was outstanding as the others. You make us wait but you do deliver A++ work. I am obsessed with this story. I will be checking again to cure my addiction.
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  • From Parts on August 12, 2007
    If you are back then I am back also.

    I have been waiting for your return.
    This is the best. I love it!

    Please stay and update AGAIN SOON! I missed you.
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  • From ANON - vineyard flower on August 12, 2007
    Your story is breathtakingly awesome. I can not tell you how anxious I am to read more. Your story is bold and daring with its plot. It takes you along with flawless chapters that flow like waterfall. Each chapter just builds the excitement for the next. You do a masterful.

    Your main characters are MARVELOUS!

    Ky'an is powerful and Sexy. I love that he has a personality and not just some stiff creature with no feeling. He is not one to cross as Setra knows well now. I love that he realizes that he wants Paula and not just for sex; although, that was AWESOME! He has much depth that I caa not wait to read more.

    Paula is a beautiful, funny, strong, Woman of color. I do not see many fanfictions with WoC's as the main character. BRAVO!!! She is storng without having to be a bruiser or use foul language. She can get her point across just being herself. I love her.

    I love the depth of your writing. Please continue with this story I see no equal in this section. vineyard flower
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  • From Airporter on August 11, 2007
    Even with though you were MIA, you came back with STYLE!

    You have lost nothing.You still have that edge that sets you apart from everyone else in my book. This story is the top. It contains everything a story must have to be a masterpiece. I have to say it is complete. Do not let us rush you into writing another excellent chapter you take your time and do it right.
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