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Reviews for The Viper's bite

By : Malestorm
  • From ANON - Lovydovy on October 11, 2006
    I don't smoke but I wanted to during that bath scene. Them cuddled up together was nice too. More of that and she will beg him for it. He should tease her, make her a little jealous before he delivers. Make her ache for it Kyan. Great story by the way.
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  • From ANON - Lorna on October 11, 2006
    *chuckles* Bring on the next chapter Bluy
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  • From Granite on October 11, 2006
    I had to go back and Log in but I read it again and I still think it is Sexy and Hott so what if everyone else thought so too. Why did n't they leave there name? But anywho bring on the next chapter and I'll try noe to use any of the words anyone else uses. * rolls eyes*
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  • From Summersand on October 11, 2006
    WEll lets get it on. I think Paula wants it or she will soon enough LOL. You know that would be a mess if Mya started looking at Grails with that dreamy look in her eyes. I think he'd leave Se'tra in a heartbeat.

    P.S On a side note, I have looked at others reviews and noticed that the reviews are sometimes the same. SO WHAT. In my opinion I do not think anyone outside of this category would care about how many reviews you have. Just the same I made sure that my review did not contain the word Sexy or Hott. Hey you keep writing I know A lot of people who love this story as I do.
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  • From ANON - bodydouble on October 10, 2006
    Okay let me try my review again. (shakes hands to relieve tension) Sexy Hott. do you normally write about what the writer writes. Maybe I think so. Hmmmmmmm I'll email ya
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  • From Verbatim on October 10, 2006
    Damn what is wrong here if you have to defend your reviews. Man!!!! Hell it was Sexy Hott. Honestly I do not know how you write in this category with all the crap sometimes. I honestly do not but I know I would be fighting alot if I decided to compose a piece of literature that is why I do not.

    You go on writing and if someone is jealous because of the number of reviews then Damn, sorry, people like your story. That is that. love ya Blu!
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  • From ANON - Bluflame on October 10, 2006
    Yeah I think they are all thinking the same thing. Hey even you said it and I was going for the serious and unfeeling type of review but I will not complain. Bluflame
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 10, 2006
    wow a lot of these reviews sound like the same person changing the name! ROTFLMAO
    sexy hottt
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  • From ANON - SafeHaven too lazy to log in on October 10, 2006
    That was sexy Hott More Please MOre I need it You are an awesome writer Blu!!!
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  • From ANON - vanthegreat on October 08, 2006
    Please I eagerly wait the next chapter whether they do it or not this story is one of the best!
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  • From ANON - lil'bit on October 07, 2006
    I think you need to continue this Ky'an needs some Paula she knows she wants it. Go Grails and he should have Mya Se'tra be damned. Great writing now more
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  • From ANON - WTLM on October 07, 2006
    Ah I want more this is AWESOME!
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  • From ANON - Walkingpapers on October 06, 2006
    Trully AWesomely HOTT you must update Please you are amazing!!!!
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  • From Carelessl on October 05, 2006
    Let the Beast out Bluflame don't hold it in. You are making me beg come on. I love this story!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 05, 2006
    You know how to write. Blu you cannot leave it like this. I cannot believe you would do your friend like this. *sighs* This amzing and beautiful and awesome and all those other words of praise please CONTINUE
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