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Reviews for The Viper's bite

By : Malestorm
  • From Mitresslove on December 19, 2006
    I love how you write and I am terribly in love with this story. I will beg for an update right now.UPDATE PLEASE!
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  • From wydow on December 17, 2006
    EXCELLENT. You are my favorite writer BY FAR!!! This story is soooooo AWESOME I can read it over and over again. What will Se'tra do now that Grails does not want her. Paula should be careful.I wonder if she will give i to Ky'an I know she wants to.EXCELLENT writing.
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  • From ANON - Artwzrd7 on December 17, 2006
    Thanks for another sizzler. Paula is sounding slightly possessive when Setra touched Kay'an. Setra is offering, but will Paula? Will he fall to Setra's temptation? Will Kayan make her initiate everything beyond his seductive foreplay? Will he just take it as I'm sure she'd like him to? Don't know, but I can hardly wait to find out how long she will be able to deny him pleasures. Wonderful writing!
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  • From ANON - Walkingpapers on December 15, 2006
    I still think this is SExy, Hott and AWESOME. You know you can write some stuff GIRL!!!
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  • From Parts on December 13, 2006
    There aint nothing better than this in my opinion. It is so amazing. I can read it cover to cover anytime. You know your amazing don't you. Do not make me wait so long again please oh please.
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  • From ANON - Bee on December 11, 2006
    Finally you posted! LOL. Fantastic chapter as always! I can't wait to read more about Grails and Mya and Paula and Ky'an. Will Paula fall for Ky'an? I don't think she has a choice because I don't think he is going to let her go!
    Please post again soon!
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  • From lovingall on December 11, 2006
    Blu Blu Blu I LOVE when you write and the way you do it is naughty and Nice!
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  • From ANON - evoD on December 11, 2006
    You are good. I want you to know that. It does not matter how many times I read this story I am always EXCITED. It is amazing. Bring on number 8
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  • From ANON - Deverwood on December 10, 2006
    Se'tra will be on the warpath trying to get Ky'an back. Paula should be weary and I think Ky'an knows Se'tra well so he wants Paula to learn to defend herself. Grails is fast becoming someone I could love. You have made my night. Please continue to make them all this awesome with more updates. AS Always I will be checking.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 10, 2006
    Please do this again real soon. I can not get enough of this story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 10, 2006
    Can you please update this ALOT!! IF you wrote a book I would buy it. I am so Hooked on this don't let me come down from this high!
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  • From Mackrel on December 10, 2006
    This is the most Sexy and Beautiful written piece I have read on this board. It is soo Damn Good .You made my day. I hope you continue posting regularly. I have always looked at this story but never read it until now. KEEP GOING YOU HAVE A MASTERPIECE THAT I LOVE!!!
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  • From Carelessl on December 10, 2006
    What are you trying to do make me beg!!. You mean thing you. Paula should just give it up to Ky'an or let him take it. OH BOY!!!! lol I can not wait for you to update Get on it. You know this is Fabulous right?
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  • From ANON - INC on December 10, 2006
    You NEVER disappoint me. This story is SOOOO GOOOOD. You must keep it HERE in plain sight.
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  • From Softly on December 10, 2006
    I would read your grocery list and melt with every word. You are phenomenal I love this and I never want it to end. Please Update!!!!
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