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Reviews for The Viper's bite

By : Malestorm
  • From Mackrel on December 31, 2006
    She wants him! She will never doubt his prowess as a lover. Hmmmmmmm Once you've had Ky'an's hard flesh you can not live without it. oh baby! You go on !Bluflame
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  • From ANON - evoD on December 31, 2006
    My My Another smokin' chapter. You keep this us and this story will birst into flames when Paula gets that Hard flesh. t*trembling* You are an awesome writer to make the reader feel what you want them to feel. Perfection!
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  • From Parts on December 31, 2006
    What is she doing? I know and I think she will know soon enough! Blu you are making me have weird tingling feelings and I want to be tangled in this web you are weaving forever. Marvelous writing!!!!
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  • From ANON - Myliana on December 31, 2006
    Just keep going this is the most Thrilling and Seductive piece of work I have ever read I love it every single word!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Private Persons on December 31, 2006
    DAMN! If this ain't the Fic I MUST READ EVERY DAMN DAY! I don't know what is. This thing is SEXY as HELL and Beautifully written, NEXT CHAPTER!
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  • From ANON - missy on December 31, 2006
    more please. loving this story.
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  • From Airporter on December 31, 2006
    Bella. You write Sexy very very very well. Your story is NEVER dull. I read it often update or no. Bluflame; your characters run that HOTT.
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  • From Allure on December 31, 2006
    You know that I will be bothering you to update againt his week because I NEED my KY'an Paula fix. HOW can she deny him. I think he would have had her if Jake'her had not arrived. Se'tra is getting bolder. She still wants that Hard flesh because she can't forget it. MANNNNN!!! I am feining for this already.
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  • From ANON - Novicegirl on December 31, 2006
    OH YEAH. shivers You know what..... Damn girl Just keep writing.
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  • From Deeplove on December 31, 2006
    Ky'an is sooo Damn SEXY!! I just shake my head. I Love Jake'her I cracked up he reminds me of my Uncle. Oh Damn! Se'tra is now on the war path. I love this I LOVE THIS.
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  • From Mitresslove on December 31, 2006
    Blu. Sighs You are so amazing you convey SUCH Emotion with your writing it is A TINGLER!!!! DO YOU HEAR ME!!! "You fight well Paula" *Sighs* I LOVE IT!! MORE!!!
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  • From Amari on December 31, 2006
    PLease write more I wait panting always panting for more from you. You are an amzazing writer and I see that alot but it is sooo true. PLEASE UPDATE
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  • From Mitresslove on December 31, 2006
    You are so awesome!! I love this story to Death. Ky'an and Paula getting close and then getting interrupted only adds to this MASTERPIECE. Please update soon I will be watching and waiting.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 30, 2006
    I got kicked off and had to go back and log on. You. Are. so. AWESOME. I could read this over and over without stopping. I love this. MORE!!!
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  • From Deeplove on December 30, 2006
    I love your story write more. What is Se'tra going to do.
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