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Reviews for The Viper's bite

By : Malestorm
  • From ANON - Della Bear on January 01, 2007
    What is Se'tra planning to do to Paula. Jealousy is dangerous and so is this your writing. I can't wait for my husband to come home. LOL Woah!! This is Sizzling So sizzling. I can not stop reading it. Please hurry and update.
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  • From ANON - bodydouble on January 01, 2007
    Let me say I love you.LOL You are so good at this you could write a novel and I would read it because I know what you can make me feel. Damn this story will be in my dreams. You are so good.
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on January 01, 2007
    Make your move Set'ra, I dare ya.

    I love Jake'her, he sounds like a cool old sexy Yautja dude. I can't wait for the feast.

    Great chapter, can't wait for more.
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  • From Carelessl on January 01, 2007
    HMMM HMMM AWESOME. You write soooo DAMN GOOD. I can not get enough. The flow , the feelings I get from just reading this make it IRRESTIBLE! More you have to give me MORE!
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  • From Verbatim on January 01, 2007
    How can you write this way and your keyboard not explode? You are such a tease. Ky'an nedds the loving ; he wants the loving. Paula does too. I can not wait for the update. EMAIL me!!!
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  • From ANON - Symetrical break on January 01, 2007
    You know I need more. Paula wants him so bad she don't even know it. Oh flame you tease us so. This is Awesome!
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  • From Edison on January 01, 2007
    This story is so GOOD I wish you would update everyday. I can not get enough of it. Itis like a good book that I Do not want to stop reading no matter if I know what is going to happen. I love it and I want more of this magnificent writing.

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  • From ANON - Crazytail on January 01, 2007
    You are such a terrible teaser. I LOVE IT!!!! This is just tooo good not to read again and again. You are a wonderful Writer!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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  • From Summersand on January 01, 2007
    Your story is so well written and so Awesome I can barely wait for you to update. I love Ky'an and Paula. I am totally ADDICTED TO THIS MORE!!!!
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  • From ANON - Bluflame on January 01, 2007
    Kehlan,

    Technically Yautja do not have lips but they do in this story. It will be explained why this happened in either chapter 10 or 11. Thanks for reading and reviewing
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  • From ANON - aquamum on January 01, 2007
    Great Story,
    I'm thrilled to read it - it's wonderful
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  • From ANON - Zee on January 01, 2007
    Very well written and very interesting. It's like one of those novels that you can't put down until you reach the end. I hope to read more very soon!
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  • From ANON - kehlan on January 01, 2007
    I am really enjoying this story and can't wait to read more. thank you for sharing it.

    I do have one small question though, about your kissing scene. Do Yautja actually have lips? I would imagine that kissing a Yautja is very very different to kissing an Ooman.
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  • From ANON - Artwzrd7 on January 01, 2007
    You enjoy torturing us don't you. Well I keep coming back for more. It seems Paula is almost ready to beg for it. I can only imagine, but soon I hope she won't have to only imagine. Simply hot and tempted.

    Look out Paula cause Setra wants your warrior. Play dirty girl, if you must!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 01, 2007
    This just burns a hole in my computer screen. Giving me something Awesome To read this morning.You are a Fanstatic writer
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