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Reviews for The Viper's bite

By : Malestorm
  • From Payden on January 06, 2007
    They will forever be interrupted won't they? I don't care it just adds to this beautifully written piece of work you have here Blu!! IT is breathtakingly amazing. If those two words go together.

    How can I write when I can not get your story out of my head. I love it more than my OWN!!! You are an AWESOME writer and I REALLY REALLY mean that. Please continue I demand it. I love the VIPER'S bite.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 05, 2007
    I bet you have to air out that keyboard everytime you post. You are SOOO MEAN!!!! leaving us at weeks at a time. But it makes us want more. You are remarkable and an awesome writer. Get it on with Ky'an and Paula. What could Se'tra possibly do now?
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  • From ANON - Cookie on January 05, 2007
    Well, I will no longer expect them to lay in smutty goodness anytime soon. Just too many interruptions that will stretch on with hot interludes until readers are bursting into flames. With all this build up, please do not spare all the smutty little details. Hentai that I am, now and then. Great writing!
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  • From ANON - lil'bit on January 04, 2007
    You know what I want. MORE! Paula wants him she will realize that. How can she resist him as smooth as he is. LIke Butter. I can not stop reading this you must hurry and added more to this fanstatic story. You know you are an magnificent writer.!
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  • From ANON - INC on January 03, 2007
    Wow.... More, I am in love with this story and your beautiful writing!
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  • From Softly on January 03, 2007
    I think Paula's life is in mortal danger. I absolutely Love your writing. Paula is beginning to realize that she reacts to Ky'an the way he reacts to her. I see a connection but I am not saying anything. Again I absolutely LOVE the way you write and if you write anything else please email me; including another chapter of this.
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  • From lovingall on January 02, 2007
    I have been waiting a long time for you to update and you NEVER disappoint. I will tell you, I will be reading this entire story again simply because I love it and it is THAT DAMN GOOD!!!
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  • From Harbor on January 02, 2007
    You are just toying with my emotions. I so want Ky'an and Paula together. This is my favorite story in aff. I love your writing. SO continue and update already.
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  • From on January 02, 2007
    I love how you write. This is so great to read. I don't want to stop but there are not anymore chapters after 8!!! (shameless attempt to make you post) You are amazing and I love the way this story flow. You deserve every review here. This is trully aa Awesome, refreshing , Lovely, Hott, and Sexy read!
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  • From ANON - kehlan on January 02, 2007
    Bluflame, I hope you didn't mind me asking that question. I just want to repeat that I am really loving this story and I hope you update soon because otherwise the suspense is going to kill me...
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  • From karmaxp on January 02, 2007
    You do know how to make us beg. I am begging now that you update. I am so hooked on your story. It is very well written full of allt he stuff a Excellent story needs. You do it so well and with ease. I need more Viper in my diet!
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  • From Granite on January 02, 2007
    Please go on. You are making me tingle and I need more of this addicting story to fill my need. It is trully Marvelous!
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  • From ANON - Bee on January 01, 2007
    Bluflame you defintely know how to keep a reader on the edge of her seat! You and your cliffhangers! LOL. I want to read some more Kyan and Paula! So please post again...soon...very soon.
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  • From Khale on January 01, 2007
    Waiting patiently for your update I will not rush the Master of Seduction.
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  • From wydow on January 01, 2007
    I am smiling from ear to ear because you are a fabulous writer Blu. I can not imagine what Se'tra is thinking coming to Ky'an's door to hurt Paula. Apparently she misses that hard flesh. You CERTAINLY know how to write. Now to the showers!
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