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Reviews for The Viper's bite

By : Malestorm
  • From Greyson on January 09, 2007
    YOU ARE MY IDOL!!!

    Isn't is just like someone not to want what they have until he or she has someone else. Se'tra realizing that too late and doing something very dangerous to her health like harming Paula. I mean he warned her.
    Love this, absolutely love Ky'an's anger scene. HOw he could hear nothing but his heartbeat and feel total rage and taking it out on Se'tra just made me happy. She deserves everything she is going to get.
    I love Jake'her. No grey with him.
    Saks is so carefree.

    I am in love with the last scene in this beautiful writing display that was so LOVELY.
    Is he falling for his pretend mate and how soon will the pretend part drop!
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  • From ANON - Deverwood on January 09, 2007
    AS usual you make my night and day with your writing. This is absolutely Beautiful to me.You got it all here and leave me wanting MORE! You do it so effortlessly. Keep going!!!!
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  • From ANON - Correena on January 09, 2007
    I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOUR STORY! ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY!
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  • From ANON - Private Persons on January 09, 2007
    I am sooooo engrossed in this story don't ever take time off or I will go through withdrawal like a junkie. This is fanstaic writing Bluflame I am absolutely printing it out and reading it at work!!!
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  • From Parts on January 09, 2007
    I am ready for more. You make the tingling flow My dearie! I was blown away by this chapter. I am so glad Paula made and awesome come back to Se'tra. Lovely writing. Tender scene at the end I LOVED IT! Now What will Ky'an be thinking? She is hurt and if he had not brought her there none of this would have happened? MAYBE! chapter 10!
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  • From ANON - bodydouble on January 09, 2007
    Oh my oh my this is what can I say other than AWESOME. Se'tra knows he wants Paula and does what she does chaos havoc and pain. I was amazed at Ky'an's reaction to kill her I guess he feels something for Paula.LOL. Blu if I may call you that. UPDATE!
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  • From Edison on January 09, 2007
    Priceless piece of work!!!! What was she thinking that he would not do anything to her. It is his PAULA. I loved the surge of emotions when he saw her tears. I loved everything about this. You keep me glued to the screen. it is a work os Excellence.

    Oh yeah LOVED the end scene. PRICELESS
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  • From ANON - Curves of steel on January 09, 2007
    It kicked me out but MANN!!!! Oh you let it all hang out!!!! This was thrillingly , exciting, Sexy and AWESOME WRITING! and I LOVE IT. SE'tra DESERVES what she got and more. Ky'an oh how I love him. Calm but deadly. The last scene was so touching I love it I love this. Okay I'll stop saying that. IS he going to regret bringing her there now? I need an update. BEAUTIFUl!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 09, 2007
    Are we updating today?

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  • From ANON - Walkingpapers on January 08, 2007
    AWESOME ANd Hott. You know what you are doing just building it up girl!!! You are a TERRIFIC WRITER
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  • From Khale on January 07, 2007
    Please emali me when you are going to update. PLEASE!
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  • From Amari on January 07, 2007
    Absolutely need more, craving this. It is Fanstatic!!!! Please update ...TODAY or you know when can. I am not begging really I am not. MORE
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  • From Mackrel on January 07, 2007
    I forgot something


    UPDATE SOON!!!!!!:) :) :)
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  • From Mackrel on January 07, 2007
    I love this story for several reasons. Not only because it ROCKS and SIZZLES and burns a hole through my computer screen. It is so beautifully written. You convey the emotions so eloquently and DAMN SEXY!!. Your characters are not mindless beasts only thinking of trying to stab a Ooman or have sex with them for no reason. Ky'an is the perfect example of one developing as the story progresses. True he wants Paula but he wants her to want him. He wants more than just to mate and forget. LOL. PAula is not just falling all over him and acting like a woah is me type girl. I loved that it is so easy for you to write that and we are not left wondering what is going on. I Love this story and I want more and more. I read it from beginning to end without a break because it is so AWESOME. Well rounded, delicious, addictive, beautiful piece of WORK!
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  • From ANON - Deverwood on January 06, 2007
    You make my day every time youpost. This story is like a romance Yautja style. I love it. Awesome writing and an Awesome story. please update soon.
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