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Reviews for The Viper's bite

By : Malestorm
  • From Keen on January 10, 2007
    Great job Blu. I particularly liked the set up leading to the fighting. The casual mention of the heavy sculpture was a nice touch.
    I must be off to read the previous chapters now that I am sufficiently hooked.

    Cheers,
    Cam
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  • From karmaxp on January 10, 2007
    Ky'an is so damn Sexy and Powerful and IN LOVE with Paula. You do not mess with HIS MATE. I guess Se'tra knows that now. You are a Magnificent writer and I anxiously sit here waiting for you to update quicker!!!
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  • From Mitresslove on January 10, 2007
    Blu I love the way you write. Your story is so addictive as some have said. I can hardly wait until the Ky'Pa happens. You are totally my favorite author.

    btw
    Are you writing anymore after this story?
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  • From Mackrel on January 10, 2007
    See you are spectacular. I am in awe and I trully can not wait for more from you. Just freaking spectacular!
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  • From RedWine on January 10, 2007
    Incase you wish to start an email list here is mine. (no pressure just a suggestion) heee
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  • From ANON - Fadeaway Blond on January 10, 2007
    If I could give you ten stars I would. This is just so Sensual, sexy. erotic, Passionate, Humorous, Action, Love, Lustful and Addictive story I LOVE to read. EXCELLENT writing
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  • From ANON - Novicegirl on January 10, 2007
    Oneof the few stories that I can read over and over with out feeling disinterested or unfulfilled. You just KNOW how to write. this is trully a masterful job. BRAVO BEllA
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  • From ANON - INC on January 10, 2007
    All I want is more. I can not stop reading this because it is Too good. You know that don't you. It's okay because I think it is Marvelous!
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  • From Amari on January 10, 2007
    Passionate and powerful that is Ky'an. Love the interation with he and Paula. *tingles* It will be even more akward for Paula because she is starting to feel more than like for Ky'an. Love the scene after Ky'an realized he should be with Paula instead of wasting his time with Se'tra. Beautiful job. Bring it on I am waiting.
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  • From Deeplove on January 10, 2007
    RAW power Hmmmmm. He cares for our Paula just like Se'tra was realizing. She knows now that her interference will not be tolerated. Love the scenes of Ky'an and Paula. Will he wannt to send her home now or now that he realizes he wants her more than just one night will he keep her. LOVE this AWESOME writer
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  • From ANON - Della Bear on January 10, 2007
    OH YES absolutely Awesome. What kind of loving will we see. Hard passion? I think so.Beautiful chapter just beautiful!
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  • From ANON - Cookie on January 09, 2007
    So sensual and loving, yet masterfully deadly twist. I have to bow to this one. Can barely stand to wait for more heat and passion. Soon please. If I could purr I would.
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  • From Carelessl on January 09, 2007
    Ky'an acts like a person in love. No one wants to see the one they love cry. That was intense and good I wanted him to throw her through the wall. Loved the almost loving always!!!!. Now that she is hurt is he going to regret having her there to hurt Se'tra? Fabu writing
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  • From ANON - Myliana on January 09, 2007
    Scandalous and Hott is how I would describe this. Beautifully written and the end of the chapter I was like in awe and I could feel his peace as he laid with her. It was AWESOME!! You know the drill MORE
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on January 09, 2007
    Kill Set'ra, kill Set'ra, kill Set'ra. Why didn't you let Ky'an just kill her? Or has Jake'her got something in mind, he seems to be a male you don't want to be on the wrong side of.

    Another great chap. Keep going Blu.
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