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Reviews for The Viper's bite

By : Malestorm
  • From Mitresslove on January 14, 2007
    You had better continue this. We can not update all we want to do is read your story becasue it is excellent. Passion and Hottness just smoking off the screen . You are a master.

    btw
    If The Viper and Wolf got into a fight who do you think would win?
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  • From Allure on January 13, 2007
    OKay again I am so glad you stayed. If you did not I would hunt you down and gut you like a fish. ( just kidding about the fish part lol) This is just TOOO DAMN GOOOD to leave us wondering. I love the way you write it is perfection to me!
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  • From ANON - Artwzrd7 on January 13, 2007
    Can't wait for the next installment of lusty goodness. Love the way you write passion. Kyan is a dream.

    Just a note: I wish fellow authors had not removed their fics. Maybe they are regrouping to not let my favorite fanfics ever disappear? Ya'll know your fans have been faithful, please don't help that individual destroy it. Relax, relate, release!
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  • From Softly on January 13, 2007
    I am so glad you weathered the storm and all is at peace once again but this story is ON FIRE. You have to get us through this set back Will she heal quickly so Ky'an can say to her once again. "You know you want it." LOL GREAT GREAT AWESOME WRITING!!!
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  • From ANON - Symetrical Break on January 13, 2007
    Another sizzling and Powerful chapter. All this tension will break won't it. soon.
    Give me more I love this Yautja ROmance !
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  • From ANON - aquamum on January 13, 2007
    I'm new to your story - it's great !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Enought with the sexual tension please - it's killing me.........


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  • From AdamIam on January 13, 2007
    Blu this is awesome Story wise, writing, and Flow. I can not stop reading it( you know that good book thing) I am so glad Ky'an came to his senses and realized there was something better to do then waste his time on Se'tra. Beautiful writing. MORE!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 12, 2007
    Your story is beautifully written . i love this. MORE
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  • From Airporter on January 11, 2007
    You are a masterful writer. I LOVE the feelings you convey when I read this. Beautiful
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  • From ANON - evoD on January 11, 2007
    Positively the best pred story in my opinion. I love it and PLEASE UPDATE!!!!
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  • From ANON - Crazytail on January 11, 2007
    I love your characters; Especially Ky'an and Paula. I absolutely LOVE the way they interact with each other. It is AWESOME. You know they need some alone time!. Will his desires change now that she is hurt? I do not think so He gets what he wants and often*smiles*
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  • From Allure on January 11, 2007
    "No Paula I would not like it if you were hurt." I guess not. Se'tra needs to die. I hope she gets her just desserts. I wonder what Jake'her will do to her. I love Ky'an and Paula doing ANYTHING TOGETHER!!!! You have made this sooooo GOOOOD and AWESOME. I have to read it again and again. Until you update which I hope is soon. LOVELY!!!
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  • From ANON - lil'bit on January 11, 2007
    I pay you homage for this awesome story. Oh how I love your writing, your words are beautiful. I am a Ky'an /Paula shipper until the end then I will read it over and over again. Fanstatic!
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  • From ANON - Bee on January 10, 2007
    God this story just keeps getting better and better. *sigh* I love all the interaction beteen Kyan and Paula though it seems that Paula is still fighting her feelings for him, not that I think she can resist that sexy hunter. Remember Kyan always get's what he wants. *wink*
    Setra sucks! I wish Kyan had finished her off.
    Love your story, keep the chapters coming!
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  • From Granite on January 10, 2007
    He can not give her up I do not care if he regrets brining her on board the ship. HE loves her or likes her very much. but I don't think you try to kill someone over like.

    You are working this masterpiece!!

    I need a heads up when you post again. I left my email for ya!
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