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Reviews for Sparrow's Odyssey

By : EvilE
  • From LizzieSwan on November 03, 2007
    You're amazing! I love ya! Really good fic!:D;)
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  • From Arraya on September 13, 2007
    holy...#@***#@ *#@@!!!! exquisite torture....damn...so awesome I am at a complete loss for words....damn....
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  • From akathetoad on June 29, 2007
    Another gem. (as you can see I'm reading all of them). I love how wicked it was. So hot!
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  • From ANON - mee! on June 28, 2007
    good!
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  • From MizuOnna on May 30, 2007
    This was a wonderful read, as are all your stories. :) The chemistry between the two of them was well-crafted. Thank you for this lovely piece! You've just made my day. :)
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  • From ANON - howlongmustiwait on April 22, 2007
    Just re-read this for the third time and it's still amazing, absolutely amazing.
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  • From SassySparrow on March 12, 2007
    Now THAT was the most erotic and sensual story I've ever read! Especially the part when Jack out his head on her should and she was stroking his back.....*sigh*
    Excellent, a real masterpiece! Love it... your ideas for the plots are out of this world...... MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    ~Saskia~
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  • From ANON - jj on December 30, 2006
    i loved it! i like how you work with the fact that elizabeth in COTBP is indeed innocent still, essentially a girl in a woman's body. jack was perfect with her. lovely fic. :)
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  • From ANON - Lisa on November 08, 2006
    This is without a doubt the BEST Island fic that I've read to date, and I have read quite a few. I've been a J/E fan since Curse of the Black Pearl and the hostage scene with Jack and Lizzie. Dead Man's Chest just intensified that feeling. Anyway, I LOVE this fic. It's both creative and well written. You actually pay attention to spelling, punctuation, and grammar. That is my biggest quibble with most fics. I spend most of my time correcting errors in my head rather than actually reading/enjoying the fic. Additionally, Jack and Lizzie were in character. The use of Homer's Odyssey to tell the tale was ingenious. I LOVE how Jack and Lizzie pretend to be the princess and the sailor (well, pirate)and never really admit they're doing anything other than playing roles. It is also neat how sexy you made this without Lizzie ever truly losing her virginity. Jack also acted the part of the gentlemen (Which, we all know he is underneath that roguish exterior) by preserving her for marriage, but he still allowed her to experience her sexual awakening. My favorite line is when Lizzie say "That seems safe enough", and Jack replies "You said that an hour ago" to the use of her hands to deal with his arousal. That was sexy and amusing simultaneously. All in all this fic was sweet and innocent and incredibly hot and sensual at the same time. That's a tough tightrope to walk, and I must say you did it beautifully. Congrats!!!!
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  • From ANON - nuit on November 04, 2006
    I LOVE this..have read several times and sent links to people. Is wonderful and sensual, erotic, clever, respectful and brilliant. Jack is jack, she is Elizabeth and yet you have woven a story that encompasses them both in more. is just great *claps*
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  • From ANON - KiwiGirl on September 14, 2006
    Fantastic....loved the intensity of this story. Jack was breath-taking. Now I have to read all your other works.
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  • From ANON - Mari on August 31, 2006
    That is just beautiful. It's like a legend or fairy tale in itself. I love the whole premise and what Elizabeth tells him at the end. So great!
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  • From ANON - pensive1 on August 23, 2006
    Oh dear me... darlin I think you have a new slave, er CONVERT to your writing... ME! This was so deliciously drawn out I was about to explode about 4 times before they did! I loved the role play, that was quite possibly the hottest part of it, I know Cap'n Sparrow enjoys a good role-play ;)


    Ever so nicely done, I shall try to read the others ASAP
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  • From ANON - Blue Magic on August 23, 2006
    What a gorgeous story. Your writing is both intelligent and intensely sensuous. You know who Jack is in all his delicious contradictions; he hasn't forgotten his real friendship with Will (unlike in a certain sequel I might mention) but he is still caught up in the delicious opportunities of the moment. He is both giving and a pirate at the same time. And might I add I was utterly breathless. Bravo.
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  • From ANON - Madamx on August 16, 2006
    I absolutely loved it! You always seem to put Jack into character and he's not an easy one to write. You're so very talented! Please write more stories like this!! We CRAVE more stories like this!!
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