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Reviews for Prized Possession

By : Maven
  • From annia316 on April 30, 2020

    I read the story in every free minute I had over the last week. It's such an amazing novel! I couldn't stop reading. You also didn't leave any questions unanswered and I love how you you wrote Sarah and Jareth. I liked how Sarah could be reasonable too and wasn't just a brat all the time. I have to point out that I loved your OC Kayla too a lot!! She is really a cool girl I would like to have a drink/chat with! Very well done! The right amount of smut / romance. Just what I needed in my fanfiction. Also the rollercoaster you put us through towards the end was amazing!! Like YEEEEESSS OMG YES!! .. wait what .. NO .. NOOOO NOOOOO !!! STOP!!! Yes? Maybe? Yess ... Yess .. YEEEESSS! :D Thank you for such an amazing story. Are you active on Tumblr / Instagram / Twitter?? Please let me know. xoxo from Austria


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  • From theskyatdawn2 on May 18, 2018

    You did a very good job on thus story. It is NY favorite one on the Labyrinth. Thank you for a very good couple days enjoying the story.


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  • From Mrs-S on January 24, 2018

    What a ride, what a rush, I laughed, I cried, i winced, absolutely fantastic 

     

    Kristen  x


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  • From ANON - Turika on February 09, 2013
    Wonderful. And a fabulous happy ending. Thank you so much for a great deal of enjoyment.
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  • From HankLover on July 27, 2012
    I LOVED this story. It is so hard to find quality writing when it comes to fanfiction. But this was absolutely superb. Funny, romantic, the love scenes were hot. Excellent work!
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  • From falien on August 22, 2010
    very nicely done i really enjoyed the story
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  • From themaidenlyra on April 18, 2010
    im in love! that storry was down right amazing. it is the perfict fit to the movie. as a matter of fact i wish this was a movie.the person who wrote the labyrinth should read this and buy it. i can tell you if i had the chance i would probly watch it as much if not more than i watch the labyrinth and i wath that movie about once a month lol
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  • From FlionndaWall on November 17, 2008
    I think you could give ol' Shakespeare himself a run for his money with this story! I laughed; I cried. I was wanted to throtle the characters at diferent times! I felt I was IN the story! (My name being Sarah doesn't help that, though! LOL) It was BEAUTIFUL! Wow! I truely hope you will continue to write many more stories!
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  • From sunflowergirl on September 19, 2008
    Please write a sequel! This one was just so fantastic.... the best one I've ever read, and nothing can top it. Seriously. You're a gifted writer, please keep on writing!
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  • From neiveamadahy on August 19, 2008
    I'd like to begin with saying that this is one of the best fanfics I've ever read, and deffinately the best Labyrinth fic I've read. You've hit the characters of Jareth and Sarah right on the head - there was no point where I felt you'd made them OOC or I couldn't believe that it was them - and that's very rare in these fanfics. Everyone seems to make Sarah too whiney, or Jareth too nice, but you've got them. It's fantastic.

    Now my only critique is that, on the occasion, I did feel that your descriptions went on just a little too long. It didn't happen often, just once or twice, but there was the odd moment where I did think 'Please hurry up? I want the story!'. You pulled the long plot-line off fantastically though, keep up the good work!
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  • From on May 30, 2008
    Wow. Nice. Although the ending bits after his misunderstanding was a bit saccharine. But that's okay.

    You did right by Jareth's character for the most part and the scorchingly hot interlude in the tub and on the bed will be burned in my memory forever. Excellent writing and a highly recommended piece of fun.

    4 Stars.
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  • From on May 29, 2008
    "No magic now asshole...just you and me. It's on, you son of a bitch."


    w00t! You go, girl! Badass!Sarah. YEAH!
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  • From on May 29, 2008
    *ACK* Damn it, Sarah. You know he's always listening, why didn't you just say what you meant the FIRST TIME?! Stupid, stupid girl.

    Poor GK.

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  • From on May 29, 2008
    His blood pounded insistently, for he couldn't bear to wait a second longer.

    Chapter 30: Possession

    -- *ACK* You are absolutely evil, to cut things off RIGHT THERE. Hot buildup and then you cut us off...just like that. EVIL.


    And now that they've come together as one, I'm terrified of what Jareth's going to do to her now. I just hope he isn't stupid enough to push her away forever.
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  • From on May 29, 2008
    "Ok, so I'm lusting..." Curbing her drifting thoughts she assured herself, "But only a little."

    -- *snort* Yeah. Right.

    Ah Sarah, so determined to keep your distance...But I'm afraid you've already given yourself away...Resist if you must...but like the struggling fly caught in the web, you only bind yourself tighter."

    -- *sounds of disgust* What a jackass. They could have something real and lasting between them if he'd let go of that, "but she hurted me!" childish attitude of his and be a real man.

    For the first time ever, he felt slightly wicked for indulging in the desire to watch Sarah, when she was so unaware of his presence.

    -- w00t! About damn time his conscience awoke.

    LMAO! That's right, Sarah. Make out with the fruit and make him realize what an ass he is. Go, girl!

    "Of course. With you I really ought to know better. Fine, what are the stakes?"

    -- I think she'd better keep her mouth shut 'cause I don't think she really wants to know...
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