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Reviews for Prized Possession

By : Maven
  • From ANON - Blackrosephantom on August 09, 2006
    "Sarah frantically rose onto her knees, sitting back on her heels as her eyes trailed slowly and reluctantly up his imposing frame. The black leather boots went to his knees. Upward her eyes drifted, over dark gray breeches that left little to the imagination. Her gaze darted higher still, over a mahogany leather waistcoat, cinched low, exposing a pristine white poet's shirt. His shirt was slightly open at the throat, revealing the amulet that hung in place against his alabaster chest."

    Dont we all wish to be in THAT TANTALIZING POSITION? =Fans herself and faints=

    Great start to your story. Love the flow of words. Please edit some sentences which have Os separating them.
    Please put paragraphs closer together.






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  • From ANON - Maria on August 03, 2006
    Awesome story I love it. Keep writing. I would love to read more.
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  • From ANON - Naria on August 03, 2006
    V. intriguing!! I Like it a lot!! I mean, you're continuing the story in a very porbable way along with the whole "Jareth's an asshole" theme still well intact!! ^_^ Sarah would SO not just out of the blue decide she's freakishly attracted to the smexy man, let alone suddenly love him! I HATE stories that do that...GRR!! This is Jareth's wonderful slow seduction via slave treatment! WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!! I want MOAR!! MOOOOAAARRR!!! pLEASE?! PLEASE?!
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  • From ANON - kookookitty on August 03, 2006
    this is a really intreiging story... i found your character explainations/personality descriptions to be very insightful. i am in anticipation of your next update, so many questions to be answered...

    thank you,
    ginny
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