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Reviews for Prized Possession

By : Maven
  • From ANON - Katie on December 23, 2006
    ACH! Update! Please. Man I'm dying here. I'm loving Sarah's new attitude. I want to see how she and Nyx battle it out!
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  • From ANON - smcandy on December 21, 2006
    Not bad though it took me a while to remember you updated not very long ago on this but none the less it was good chapter.

    Especially Sarah being the hero instead of Jareth lol (^^) anyway you did awesome once again cannot wait for chapter 40 please post it ASAP.

    ~sm-candy~
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  • From ANON - Luna on December 20, 2006
    You rock.

    I have only recently become aquainted with the movie Labyrinth...actually it was last friday...anyways, I just wanted to say that you have a wonderful story. I actually have never written a review for anyone, but I felt compelled to tell you how much I like your story. You have a wonderful writing style; it flows very nicely and the characters seem realistic. I can't wait to see what you have coming.

    Oh, and badass Sarah rocks, too.
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  • From ANON - chasa on December 20, 2006
    AAAAHHHHHH!!!! If it's at all humanly possible, please update! This has been my favorite Laby story for so long now, where I found it on jestersworld.net, that I just now found it here.....aaahhhh!!!!! I love your imagination and attention to detail. You don't get too caught up in the moment so that your action sequences become unintelligible...

    Just......gaahhh!! I just love this story! Ciao! ~ chasa
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  • From ANON - Anna McNarin on December 19, 2006
    That last paragraph was hysterical. I have to say I like the bad ass Sarah very much. Your story line is simply wonderful, it's so long yet it doesn't lose any momentum or plot twists. Great job.
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  • From ANON - greer on December 19, 2006

    So good, please write more! Although I know it is the holidays and that can be rather difficult. Still, I love your story a lot!!
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  • From ANON - StandsAlone on December 12, 2006
    Jeez, I am an avid reader of this story. Sarah kicking Fae ass is like freaking awesome. I love the ending lines, perfect cliffhanger material. :D Keep going!
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  • From ANON - Tigress on December 12, 2006
    I have to say, I've read this piece through several times, and I really admire the fact that it actually has a plot; that it's not just smut for smut's sake. Usually when people invent things about the Underground, it sounds very contrived and fake, but both your settings and your characters seem as though they could plausibly exist. Well done.
    And, so that this turns into a constructive review, you might want to have someone else you know read this through to double-check for spelling/puncuation/grammar, etc. There's nothing seriously wrong, but there are a few little things that throw me off. Misplaced commas, the occasional run-on, that sort of thing.
    E-mail me if you want to argue. :)
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  • From ANON - Elizabeth on December 10, 2006
    I am loving badass Sarah!
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  • From ANON - Evelyn on December 10, 2006
    HELL YEAH!

    Sarah is going to kill the son of a bitch! Go Sarah, whip that ass! Hahaha, I love this story. I only come on AFF to read this specific one. I love it sooo much and you're such a great writer ^_^ Thanks for giving me something so awesome to read. Your detail isn't too much or too little. Most stories that are posted these days are dry and poorly written. Thank you for being orignal and wonderful with your words. I can't wait to read more.

    GO SARAH! Show the nigga who's the bitch in the house. Who said a female can't be the hero? Sarah's the shit.

    Saludos
    Evelyn
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  • From kookookitty on December 10, 2006
    and sarah proceeds to beat him to a bloody pulp... i laughed and laughed >=D

    well done ~ BRAVO!

    i certainly hope poor tempest is safe and stomps the rest of them.

    maybe sarah can start an underground women's movement. equality, self defence etc.

    please excuse my disjointed musings, i've not been myself recently.

    always a pleasure,
    ginny
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  • From ANON - WeepingAngelOfDeath on December 09, 2006
    Fuck yes! Go Sarah! Kick his ass! I'm totally rooting for her. ~air horn sounds~ Wooo!!!
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  • From ANON - Squall-sama on December 08, 2006
    *crise* ZOMGS!!!!! You're so horrible! Is Tempest going to live!?!?! Please, PLEASE don't kill him! >.< That would too sad! The goblins will find them all and come to the rescue--right!? And then Nyx will die because he's evil and Sarah will take Jareth back to the castle and nurse him back to health. Oh, I can just see that! Him laying in bed, near death and Sarah sitting beside him nursing him back, taking care of him! ^_^ *laughs* Well, I'm sure that probably won't happen, but either way I'm sure whatever the outcome you write will be wonderful. I can't wait for the next chappie!
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  • From ANON - Minniemayh2o on December 08, 2006
    (Pumps her fist in the air) Score! Badass Sarah. I hope she can deal with whatever the Shadow Horde has planned. They probably know that she's coming and won't be caught off guard. I'm loving this story and I hope you come out with the next chapter soon ^.^
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  • From ANON - Ravenrose on December 07, 2006
    Amazing story. I find myself checking to see if there is anything new before anything else in the morning!!
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