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Reviews for Prized Possession

By : Maven
  • From on May 29, 2008
    "You're just envious because mine is bigger..."

    Without so much as turning to look at her he challenged, "Would you care to see for yourself just how wrong you are?" He looked over his shoulder, letting his predatory gaze settle on her as his feral smile taunted, "Perhaps you'd enjoy being proven wrong in this particular instance?"

    -- Oh...NICE. Threatening and Alluring all in one pop.

    "Because she grabbed my POTATO!!!!!!!!"

    -- LMAO - absolutely priceless.

    Excellent yarn, my dear, excellent.

    I find it amusing that he's so bound and determined to make her hot and bothered, then drop her like a hot potato. (HA!) I can't wait to get to the point where he realizes it was never intentional. I mean, he says so, but he really doesn't get it. Not yet.
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  • From slayerivy on March 08, 2008
    It has been years since I've read a Labyrinth fan fic and there were some lovely ones out there, but you have taken the Jareth/Sarah romance fic to a whole different level. This story was a pleasure to read, your writing style is extremely artful and the plot was fabulous! I loved it, loved it, loved it! It makes me want to go back and rent the old movie, which I haven't watched in years. You're wonderfully talented and I can tell you took your time to make this story just right. I think you should come back to this story and give it a short epilogue...you know...a few years later, etc.

    Again LOVED IT! WOO HOO!
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  • From ginabella on August 27, 2007
    wowww icridile storie...you are an amazing author congratulation
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  • From NomadicSinner on August 15, 2007
    You can't begin to fathom how very happy you made me with this story.

    It is VERY nice to see someone who not only writes competently, but know some real literature, how to apply it, and how to keep someone's interest.

    I admire you as a writer and hope to see many more great things coming from you, and I would have reviewed sooner but........ I was intent on reading this. Very quickly.

    Anyway. Your plot was wonderful and original, your spelling and grammar were amazing (only three or so off words, but I'm an English nutter and all of these AP courses tend to get to you. You write in a way that can keep interest, is very well worded, and doesn't focus purely on sex. There was great romance, a steady consistency of characters (the new well created, the originals very well written), and the way you portrayed Jareth was positively superb. In my head I could literally see him saying words, and I haven't seen someone who could do that for a while.

    In short (not that this is anything in the vicinity of short), I positively loved this story and encourage you to write more. You have a true talent and that should not be wasted.

    Best wishes,
    ~V

    PS: Email me is you get the chance. I've been writing a story the past few days and would like to share. :D
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  • From Miffietills1988 on July 11, 2007
    What an engaging tale, I'm loving it so far!!!
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  • From Catrista on June 07, 2007
    I'm.. blown away. Completely. Not only is Labyrinth my favorite movie ( and the sad part about -that- is that the first time I saw it was only a year ago! ) but Jareth is my favorite.. deliciously wicked "bad" guy. I'd watched the movie again and again but felt sad afterward that that was it, there would be no more. Left to my imagination ( a delightfully naughty place, I assure you ) I was able to come up with all sorts of scenerios.. but they lacked.. something. Your story has brought Jereth to life again for me, and has sparked my creative side. I'm having what my friends call a Jereth episode, in which I will write and write and write for about three weeks to a month just about Jereth and Sarah until I purge the Jereth demon and am able to regain what little sanity I possess. Thank you, thank you, a thousand times thank you! Pretty please don't hesitate to contact me - I have a feeling you'd be interesting to talk to.

    Happy writing!

    - Rhiz
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  • From SilveryQueenOfSerenity on May 23, 2007
    I Need a Eulogy! Please? Why'd ya leave me at a end like that?
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  • From cobraqueen on May 07, 2007
    Loved it so much I couldnt stop reading and didnt write my psyc. essay because of it.
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  • From StainedCyrano on April 08, 2007
    Damn you... I'm crying. And I don't cry. I was thrilled to find your story some weeks back, delighted that I would have 40+ chapters of such brilliantly perfect storytelling, but as I drew closer to the end, I became nervous, not wanting to finish. I, like Jareth in this last chapter, tried to take things slow, but, like Sarah, was desperate to have what my heart truly desired. I honestly can't thank you enough, and I hope that you hear me when I say you have given me a beautiful world and a breathtaking man to spend my evenings with, when my other world seems so sad and magicless. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.
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  • From jenny on February 07, 2007
    noooooooooooo. jester please make a sequal if this is the end. it can't stop their there needs to be more of them getting along.:"( please!!!!:'( *cries* i love your story

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  • From phoenix23 on February 07, 2007
    hey! Okay, so I should tell you that I've NEVER seen Labrinyth and I don't think I've ever heard of it. I don't really watch a lot of movies so please don't be offended. But I came across your story by complete coincidence! I loved it! You did such a great job with the characters making them very descriptive and they were really dynamic. As someone who has never seen this movie, it was very easy for me to follow along!
    Congrats on writing such a great story!

    ~Sonya
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  • From RyanneDeath on February 05, 2007

    That....was positively lovely. I mean lovely in the way of a spring breeze or a half dozen sprinkled donuts. It was a masterpiece and an epic that Im sure marks what should have been the true ending. You are a true writer, one that should keep pen to page for the rest of her life.

    R
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  • From Ravenrose66 on February 05, 2007
    A fitting ending for an incredible story. Hope to see more from you.


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  • From Princess80 on February 04, 2007
    This story is fantastic! Once I started reading, I couldn't stop!!
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  • From Ravenrose66 on January 31, 2007
    Totally tantalizing. Can't wait to find out how it ends. Haven't read a fanfiction this good in awhile.
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