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Reviews for Fate Intervenes

By : GylzGirl
  • From Jacksfavoritewench on May 19, 2008
    Wow i really loved this story, it was fantastic! I love Jack and Elizabeth together, they were meant for each other! Too bad Disney didn't see it that way. But again I loved your story!
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  • From Ninajj on January 25, 2008
    weird story
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  • From akathetoad on June 29, 2007
    Ah brilliant! My favorite scene was the bathhouse, because he's such a bloody scoundrel, but the whole thing was touching and moving and utterly heartwrenching. My very favorite PotC fic I've read thus far. Even at their mushiest they still both felt in character. I've yet to see World's End, but you made me like Elizabeth again after the nonsense with the Kraken and her little hissy fit out on the beach. (And thank you, THANK YOU for making her lose that tan and the several references to her pale skin. She was the color of fake bake in Dead Man's Chest.) I just can't tell you how much this pleased me. If you haven't written more (which I'm about to go have a look at after this posts) I insist that you do, and if you have...well Hell you can never write too much yeh?

    Also, extreme kudos to having a nicely well rounded story that comes to a conclusion. I'm terribly nefarious personally for leaving them hanging after a few chapters and wandering off in search of something new and exciting.

    Loved it! Loved it!!

    -Ray the Undeniably Wicked.
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  • From Kakaro on June 17, 2007
    I thoroughly love this story, very well written. Full of emotion and of course Captain Jack Sparrow. Don't turn him into a wuss tho. :D
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  • From SassySparrow on April 30, 2007
    I simply don't know why I haven't found this story earlier! Damn it! Your story is one of the very best I've ever read! Full of emotions, very sweet and I simply love it :o)
    The fact, that it has a happy ending made it on the top of my personal favourites list.
    Please, I'm begging - write more like this. Actually, I've read this one three times since I found it and I'm sure there'll be more in the future.
    And thanks so much for sharing it with us!
    Take care,
    ~Saskia~
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  • From Femmevixen13 on April 29, 2007
    A perfect ending to an incredible story! ;D
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  • From ladydarcy0 on April 29, 2007
    Brilliant!
    I've been waiting all those weeks for a new chapter, and now I've finished it.
    I loved the story. It had the perfect combination of humor, romance and adventure.
    I do hope you'll be writing another one, not necessarily a sequel, but another Jack/Lizzie story.
    You write beautifully, and I hope you'll continue.
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  • From vexesALLmen on January 18, 2007
    only on chapter4 but Im loving it! *I especially loved the CELTIC ring for Lizzie!*

    vexesALLmen
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  • From ANON - Samantha on January 13, 2007
    Hey mate, I like this fic... just wanted to let you know that it should be "Tout suite," not "toot sweet." It's French and translates literally to "all continuation."
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  • From ANON - Snowstar on January 13, 2007
    Fabulous!! You Updated! Now please do it again.
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  • From ANON - boo-belle on January 11, 2007
    OMG!

    Loved it, loved it, loved it. (So that's what the name of "Mr.-that's-got-to-be-the-best-pirate-I've-ever-seen!")

    I can't wait to see how this amazing story ends. I'm so sad there's only one chapter left!

    Until "Scars,"
    boo-belle
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  • From ANON - venus on January 10, 2007
    woo-hoo!

    THAT WAS TOTALLY WICKED! very very pleased to see mr. and mrs. sparrow aren't dead! yipee!
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  • From ANON - missbliss on January 10, 2007
    I absolutely adore this story. Update soon!

    Really, the best Jack/Elizibeth story I've read.
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  • From ANON - howlongmustiwait on January 09, 2007
    I AM SOOOOOOO GLAD YOU UPDATED! Whew, is all I can think to say. That was some cliffhanger, I was bawling like a baby! Please don't EVER do that again - P-L-E-A-S-E! Now that my heart is beating again, next chapter. I really want to read the next chapter! Yep, yes I'm ready for the next chapter. (Can you tell I like this story?)
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  • From ANON - Ziva on January 09, 2007
    I love Groves! He is really risking a lot for Jack ans Lizzie. I'm glad Lizzies doing betterm I was really worried.
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