Click Here!

Reviews for Fate Intervenes

By : GylzGirl
  • From ANON - Arlene on August 04, 2006
    OMG, I love the fic. Please continue soon!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on August 03, 2006
    *yummy growl* Please update again soon!! :D
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Syra on August 03, 2006
    Great story! Jack + bath = definite yumminess. Please update soon.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - CrazyAlex on August 03, 2006
    This is just utterly amazing. I can't get over how wonderfully you've got Jack's character down. Your writing is wonderful.. And certain things you wrote just made me laugh. Your story is wonderful so far, can't wait until you update!'

    ..Those last two paragraphs literally made me shiver in anticipation!!


    Report Review

  • From ANON - jessica on August 02, 2006
    Ooh, we're off to a very good start! Yes, yes, Jack is indeed in need of a good scrub-down. ahem.

    Update soon!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - jadexms on August 02, 2006
    Great start, I love the storyline, and am eagerly awaiting your next installment!

    Thanks for writing!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - shatteredmind on August 02, 2006
    Goodness me, how did I miss this one till now. It's great! I can't wait for more - we have so much to look forward to - a steamy bath scene, Jack all cleaned up and getting married! You're writing is terrific and the story is a lot of fun.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - dihcar on August 02, 2006
    Fantastic start, please keep it up, there is a big shortage of Jack/Lizzie fics, wich is a real shame since they have an amazing chemistry on screen.

    seeya
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Flowerlady on August 01, 2006
    I really like this story...I hope you update soon...I'll be looking for it. I love your characterization of Jack..

    More soon.


    FL
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anguloce on August 01, 2006
    mmmmm i am most definitely intrigued! looking forward to more.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Mari on August 01, 2006
    Love the concept and the way you wrote it! Sexy :) Hope you continue soon.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Christina on August 01, 2006
    PLease update?! The story is fantastic!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Michelle on August 01, 2006
    Oh, my. What a great beginning! Loving the story...hehe, there's going to be a 'marr-i-age'. So hot, so fun. Please update soon! mmmm... washing Captain Jack...
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Sushi on July 31, 2006
    oooh ooh oooh!!!!! more please!!!! there hasn't been any smut yet, and already the anticipation is killin me ;p
    Report Review

  • From srkier on July 31, 2006
    :gulp: Holy hell! That...was intense. Oh PLEASE update soon! I'm just dying to read about the...umm...bath. Love the dialogue between the two btw. Lizzy's line about holding her breath during sex was hysterical as was Jack's comparision between her and rum. You truly have a talent for keeping these two in character and I can't wait to see where this story goes!
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!