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Reviews for Fate Intervenes

By : GylzGirl
  • From ANON - KiwiGirl on August 13, 2006
    Wow this is great. Only on chapter one but I am really enjoying this. You have captured Jack. Fantastic..
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  • From ANON - jadexms on August 13, 2006
    Awesome chapter, so well written too. Looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - jen on August 13, 2006
    Oh! I want to know what he scribbled there! Something that will come up soon...secret past?
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  • From ANON - annie on August 10, 2006
    Love it!! Kepp it up darling! :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 08, 2006
    Amazing, can't find a thing wrong with it.
    Continue, please. =]
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  • From ANON - Michelle on August 08, 2006
    ARG!!! God... How much are we all waiting for the next chapter, huh? Your writing is amazing. Very sexy, loving the J/E. Great Jack. Hope you update soon!
    I can't believe she'd still a virgin after that bath...
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  • From ANON - knit wear on August 08, 2006
    nice one.
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  • From ANON - Shimmeree on August 08, 2006
    I'm really loving this story! I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Christina on August 07, 2006
    YAY!!!! Update again?!!?!?! PLease?!!?!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 07, 2006
    I'll be back to leave a proper review after my long, cold shower ;) perhaps you'll have updated again by the time I return? hahahaha
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  • From ANON - Shad on August 07, 2006
    I like your plot and the storyline in general. A breath of fresh air and a humorous idea. Sexy too. Looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - k on August 07, 2006
    nice story. any chance you could continue?
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  • From ANON - Syra on August 07, 2006
    Please update soon. please, please, please, PLEASE. Dear god I think I need a cold shower.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 07, 2006
    Hothothot! Great job at bringing on the sexy smut. I love you!
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  • From ANON - Amelia on August 06, 2006
    Such and great story...I can't wait for the next chapter! The wedding night! *sigh*

    Reading this story puts my stomach in knots. In a good way though, trust me! If you're *this* good at writing foreplay,
    I can't imagine what your full-on sex scenes will be like! Nor can I wait. >:)
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