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Reviews for Fate Intervenes

By : GylzGirl
  • From ANON - Syra on August 18, 2006
    Oh sweet jesus! Please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Naomi on August 18, 2006
    Oh please please please write more! It is lovely. And so beautiful. You captured what I love about our Jack - he really is a softy underneith it all. Made me ache and melt at the same time. Please, we need more!!!
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  • From ANON - shatteredmind on August 18, 2006
    That ending was so sweet! Jack is smitten. "Mine" heh.
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  • From ANON - jadexms on August 17, 2006
    Excellant chapter...and hot...Your writing is very descriptive, it's easy to visualize what you're describing. Thanks for writing.
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  • From ANON - jessica on August 17, 2006
    This was one of the sweetest, most lovely J/E chapters of any story I've read in a long time. I just
    loved the dialogue between the two of them. You make it so...so... realistic and believable. I really feel for these characters.
    And that love scene? Whew! Jack was so sweet and tender and possesive of Lizzy, just like I'd imagined he would be.

    I canNOT wait for the Honeymoon chapter! *fans herself*
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  • From ANON - Lady Kaceemort on August 17, 2006
    Oh bloody my. Fantastic and mind blowing, really. YAY! Smut.... YAY! Naked Jack. YAAAAYYYYY. Happy Birthday!
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  • From ANON - LunarBasket on August 17, 2006
    Amazing story :D and Happy Birthday! Both Elizabeth and Jack are very much in character, and this is by far one of my favorite Jack/Elizabeth stories. I check it every day for updates and I can't wait for another :)
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  • From ANON - Zacarane on August 17, 2006
    I love this fanfic! It's excellent and totally IC. Please continue soon!
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  • From ANON - Madamx on August 14, 2006
    This was wonderful!! Everyone here is so talented and you're no exception. Just the right mix of emotions too! I laughed so hard at times that I cried (esp the part about Gibbs being an "edible creature"...I'm giggling even as I type this review) hahahahahhahahaha :-D Very well done! Please continue in the same spirit as you started, I'm loving it! :-)))
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  • From ANON - Mike on August 14, 2006
    Wonderfull Fic. Love the way you portrayed the character's personalitys. Please let me know when chapter four is up, thnx.

    -Mike
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  • From ANON - LadyKaceemort on August 14, 2006
    Great, great story. You have a way with words that is simply enchanting. Jack, as you write him, is completely sweet and unusually in character. Fantastic story.
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  • From ANON - Anguloce on August 14, 2006
    can't wait for the next chapter...
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  • From ANON - Shar on August 14, 2006
    This is so good! I must admit, you're much better a writer than most FF.net when it comes to characterizing people of Jack and Lizzie's time. Do update it soon, I should like to see more of it!
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  • From ANON - Hudine on August 14, 2006
    I can't sum up how much I love this story, but I can sum up why I want to see the next chapter in just 2 words 'wedding night'
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  • From ANON - Farah on August 13, 2006
    It's so realistic that it's AMAZING!!! I hope you continue on... another chpater please!
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