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Reviews for Aid'ian's Doctrine

By : Edison
  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on July 31, 2006
    I really like this. I hate Nola already. Aid'ian sounds so hot. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - zegra on July 31, 2006
    Love this piece of fiction because it is different and it is very good. Keep writing
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  • From ANON - whatever on July 30, 2006
    You know that now that you have created this monster you must help it grow. Your characters are humanlike. Hey I'd kill someone if they talked about my mother. Nola needs Loki to take her down a notch. This ia a keeper for me write on.
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  • From ANON - Novicegirl on July 30, 2006
    Awesome story. This is wonderful and entertaining. I found myself saying awww when I got to the end of the chapter. I WANT MORE!!
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  • From ANON - INC on July 30, 2006
    Oh you have to update this. I love it already and you only have two chapters. Well written is all I have to say. MORE PLEASE
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  • From ANON - SafeHaven on July 30, 2006
    Oh she scored about a seven on the Bitch meter. I don't know about you but if I would have stared or spoke to my father like that; Mannnn!!!!. I love how you have Santana acting around Aid'ian not too sure and not fearful. The part when he wanted to cut Nola made me laugh. This is Awesome. I think Aid'ian will work out a plan to get his Santana. UPDATE
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  • From on July 30, 2006
    Write more please this is going to be a favorite of mine. Excellent start real grabber.
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  • From ANON - The _Malestrom on July 30, 2006
    I'm reading it and you can not stop me. This is looking awesome to me: Girl wants Guy, Guy want another Girl and she wants... well we don't know what she wants so you have to fill us in. Congrats and welcome and I love it... The_Malestrom
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  • From ANON - scars lady 13 on July 30, 2006
    well I'm hooked, please write more.
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  • From ANON - tasha on July 30, 2006
    this sounds like a wicked beginning, i hope more comes soon!
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  • From Allure on July 30, 2006
    Good start. I like the way you introduce all your characters and I can just imagine Nols'a anger that Aid'ian wants an Ooman over her. Classic. I will be waiting for more.
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  • From ANON - Spider on July 30, 2006
    Good beginning I hope there is more where this came from....Spider
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  • From ANON - Hornet on July 30, 2006
    GOOD GOOD GOOD. Now continue with more of this. Like the flow and the introduction to the characters.
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  • From Airporter on July 30, 2006
    Wow I like it. What a great start to this. If you continue I will be reading another good story.
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  • From ANON - lil'bit on July 29, 2006
    Love the feel of this update doon Please, Very Good!
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