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Reviews for Aid'ian's Doctrine

By : Edison
  • From Greyson on July 31, 2006
    I am impressed this is a grabber type of story from the opening and now you just have us setlling in for the long haul. I know that I am. This is awesome writing and I can't wait for chapter three
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  • From Malestorm on July 31, 2006
    I REALLY like this and all the cast of characters; this is looking Sweet keep it going.
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  • From ANON - Della Bear on July 31, 2006
    I am sorry for the second post but I have no patience and I have a question about Nola.
    Where her Momma at? LOL I still think this is like Awesome!!

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  • From ANON - Leedar on July 31, 2006
    I really like what you have have here so far. Nola the bitch, Aid'ian the sexy beast and Santana warrior daughter. Write some more I will be watching for this HONEST
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  • From Payden on July 31, 2006
    AJAX! I thought the beginning was Awesome and then you turn around and make the second chapter even more Awesome than the first. You keep this up and I will just be reading your stuff. I mean it keep it up this is....well AWESOME Jakes
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  • From ANON - Della Bear on July 31, 2006
    I do not like Nola. You are doing an AWESOME JOB!
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  • From prairiefire on July 31, 2006
    You know, Nola sounds a lot like my mother. She wants what she wants, she thinks deserves to get it, and to hell with anyone in her way. And when things don't go her way, she rags on the people around her.
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  • From Allure on July 31, 2006
    Love how you tell about each character. Nola is going to be ruthless and Aid'ian is hatching a strategy to get Santana isn't he. This is very very good and I think you should grace us with more, hey think about it and get back to me.
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  • From Airporter on July 31, 2006
    Wow This was even better than the beginning. Aid'ian is going to have to come up with a strategy for getting Santana, while Nola would lay down anywhere for him. Love it and Santana with Sexy Aid'ian. Great Chapter
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  • From karmaxp on July 31, 2006
    I love this already and you will be hounded by me and others who I can get to do it if you slack off. This is great fresh blood with a kick. Go on!
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  • From ANON - SyJen on July 31, 2006
    Welcome and with Great writing, I love it and am so glad to read something like this. I'm hooked keep going
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  • From ANON - Wlakingpapers on July 31, 2006
    Nola is serious isn't she? Aid'ian is one sexy General that knows what he wants. I like Santana and how she acts with Aid'ian. You must update this I think it is SWEET and Classic boy wants girl thingy Smart.
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  • From ANON - Kraven on July 31, 2006
    Are you serious ending like that. I need more. I like this and it is Awesome for your first fan fiction. You need to update more. LOL I will be checking on this. Hey keep it on top where it belongs.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 31, 2006
    You keep this up and I will be reading only waiting for you to post. SERIOUSLY! This is amazing; a classic concept done Yuatja style. Love it and keep writing. Hey I like your Penname
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  • From ANON - Spider on July 31, 2006
    Downtime. Well I must say that you have another fan in me. This is going to be a classic because it has all the things you need to be awesome and the ability to hold one's attention. You are magnificent keep it up.
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