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Reviews for Aid'ian's Doctrine

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  • From ANON - Millen Stryker on August 04, 2006
    I read all three chapters and I am hooked.

    Nola is truly a bitch! Plus at the same time she is a Bad Blood because she wants to get rid of Santana in order to get Aid'ian. Forget tossing her out of the airlock with that sick freak Pria'ne. Send them off to a Xenomorph infested planet and leave them there. But that's just me. This Tre'not fellow, hmm. I get a feeling he's a Bad Blood as well.

    I like the fact that Aid'ian and Santana should be together and I am always rooting for it. Fantastic work.
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  • From ANON - Novicegirl on August 04, 2006
    I see turmoil ahead for Santana if Nola sees Aid'ian with her. Hey I'm looking forward to it. Keep going this is AWESOME
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  • From ANON - Walkingpapers on August 04, 2006
    LOVE IT MORE!
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  • From ANON - Della Bear on August 04, 2006
    See having no patience paid off.LOL I think Tre'not (spelling) Will help Nola because he sounds like he will be a Bad blood like her. I love the relationship between Aid'ian and Santana keep it just like that the almost stuff. Excellent work!
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  • From ANON - vanthegreat on August 04, 2006
    Nola should be floating outside the ship with Pria'ne. WHat a thing to do just leave her. Love the teasing with Aid'ian and Santana. I guess he has his plan of battle a Doctrine sort of speak. Great chapter
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  • From Airporter on August 04, 2006
    You should give Nola to Pria'ne; wouldn't that be nice. You are a horrible tease Excellent chapter I was glued to my seat keep it up.

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  • From ANON - zegra on August 04, 2006
    I love the teasing you are doing. Who is Tro'net? He does not sound like a well liked Yuatja. Nola needs a beating she is a Bitch. Write the next chapter please This is becoming one of my favorite stories.
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  • From ANON - SyJen on August 04, 2006
    I am so glad I checked this is Awesome I can not wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - WTLM on August 04, 2006
    I think you should string Nola up and beat her with a stick. Stop teasing us with Aid'ian and Santana. I love it
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  • From Payden on August 03, 2006
    Nola is starting off at Evil and I can only see her getting worse. Aid'ian bum rushing a yautja classic. I love how you have made the relationship between he and Santana absolutely love it. Continue Please
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  • From ANON - Leedar on August 03, 2006
    That was an excellent chapter I loved it. Nola needs a beat down SERIOUSLY! I Love Aid'ian looking out for what he wants and needs. EXCELLENT Next chapter
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  • From Harbor on August 03, 2006
    LOVING IT !!!! I love Aid'ian getting clean for his Santana, having dinner waiting for her, oh yeah beating the crap out of Pria'ne. HMMMMM.Nola off the Bitch meter with just those words she spoke. I was flabergasted. Magnificent MORE!!!
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  • From ANON - INC on August 03, 2006
    WOW Awesome chapter. Love everything in it.Santana starting to notice things Aid'ian bringing his lady dinner .NIICE Nola that Bitch!. I love this next chapter Please!
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  • From ANON - lil'bit on August 03, 2006
    Aid'ian *sighs* I love the almostives and could haves with the kisses LOVE THAT!!!!! Nola oh my what a BITCH. I mean LOW BITCH. Even if she did not have to do much to make him try to hurt Santana that is so WRONG. AWESOME WRITING PULLED ME IN AND SAT ME DOWN!!!!
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  • From ANON - Ajax on August 03, 2006
    SAfeHaven: How high does your Bitch meter go?
    prairiefire: Sorry that Nola is alot like your mother....SSSSOOOOOOORRRRRRYYYYYY
    Della Bear: I have not decided where her Momma at LOLOLOLOLOLOL
    Spider: I have weighed your reasons and found them just and I will update today.
    Ajax
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