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Reviews for Aid'ian's Doctrine

By : Edison
  • From ANON - INC on August 09, 2006
    LOVE this story and I think that Tron'net already knows his limit unless Aid'ian has to instruct him. Nola deserves a nice long talk from Santana. Aid'ian and Santana should have a moonlit walk and let nature run rampant LOL Love the teasing keep it up.
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on August 09, 2006
    You have to kill Tro'net. That Yautja needs to die he does and painfully. Ok.
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  • From on August 09, 2006
    Aid'ian and Santana need alot of ALONE TIME. Tro'net has no chance and no friends unless those three come with him. Nola is a true Bitch . i Loved that scene where she's acting out stuff I think crazy people do that.LOL This is AWESOME WRITING you are TEASING US WITH THIS DISPLAY and I LOVE IT!!!!!
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  • From ANON - WTLM on August 09, 2006
    Aid'ian has some secret killing sprees we don't know about. Tro'net and Nola have a history, for soem reason I don't think it was sexual. Nola is still a bitch and Santana is going to kick her butt and then Aid'ian will punish her in a way I think he desperately wantse too. I CAN'T WAIT THIS IS FANSTATIC
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  • From Harbor on August 09, 2006
    Well I think Nola sees Santana is alright and from the reaction of the Males, looking good too. I love the chemistry between she and Aid'ian it is verging on a flame then a total rampannt fire!!!! I need more, crave it, so write it! Awesome I mean it!
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  • From Payden on August 09, 2006
    AWESOME Writing I love this I see a fight on two fronts and Mea will be the battle ground. Santana already warned her. Tre'not should just go home and face his father. I want more teasing More and More to lead to stuff and lots of it!!! Aid'ian I love that name!!!!
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  • From ANON - Leedar on August 09, 2006
    That is one crazy Bitch, joy in herheart and a dance in her step.LOL She is crazy. I love Santana's line Do you require any help? At the end where she grabs her arm. She's goign to beat her at Mea. Love her and Aid'ian it is GOOD! Tro'net could be seeing death at Mea id Aid'ian decides so. Can not wait for the trip and the hot teasing you write Love it Love it!! Awesome update. What did Meh'gah do with Pria'ne?
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  • From ANON - Millen Stryker on August 09, 2006
    Tre'not is so going to get a beatdown from Aid'ian. He's such a discrace. I sense a catfight between Nola and Santana (I'm placing my bets on Santana).
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  • From Airporter on August 09, 2006
    LOL NOla is a piece of work Great writing!!!! Santana and Aid'ian I love them just like you have it slow and let it build. I think at Mea it gonna flame!LOL. Tro'net man he can't win. either his father will kill him or Aid'ian. I must have more so give us the next chapter please this is AWESOME
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  • From wydow on August 09, 2006
    That part with Nola was AWESOME!!! I think that is how people like her would act if they thought they were happy about hurting someone. I love Aid'ian's mystery about his skills. Dude did alittle killing. With a father like Tarnish Tro'net better watch out because aid'ian is thinking of an unfortunate accident of he looks at Santana like dinner. Santana and Aid'ian are HMMMMMMM. I LOVE this it is MAGINIFICENT well thought out and I am hooked... Spider
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 09, 2006
    Please Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Viewerfinder on August 08, 2006
    Craving for some Aid'ian and Santana....Update
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  • From ANON - Della Bear on August 07, 2006
    Allow me to be the first to harass you this week I need more of your story so I have more good things to read. So hurry and post for me. You are a marvelous writer!!!
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  • From Greyson on August 07, 2006
    You tease me so. This is exciting I look forward to reading it everyday and I hope you update soon because I think that Tre'not is bad news and I think he and Aid'ian willbutt heads ALOT Awesome keep it up this is fanstatic!
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on August 06, 2006
    I'll attack Nola if Aid'ian will put me over his knee afterwards. Nola and Pria'ne should be together so Santana and Aid'ian can get it on.

    Need more please and sooon.
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