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Reviews for Blue Balls

By : enonymous212
  • From pontaloon on July 15, 2009
    the chapters are too short, you mix the past tense with the present, there is some massive repetition (you keep specifying the size of their dick) and both boys seem very OOC (Duke is always tough when he's around the other guys and wouldn't blush like that. Seb is also far from gay so he'd need a pretty good reason and alot of time to think things over before turning to guys).
    Other then that, i like how you mix in what BOTH of the boys are thinking so it's not just one POV. it's also good that you didn't totally ignore the fact that they both do have girlfriends. all in all, i await the next chapter ^^
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  • From Andre on January 18, 2007
    looking forward to you're next update.
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  • From ANON - AsAlways on September 04, 2006
    so hot. . . really hot. Love it. More?
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  • From ANON - More den Luv on August 03, 2006
    I Like yur storii its real kute
    lol cCONTINUE
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  • From ANON - Wait wat who? on July 31, 2006
    CONTINUE IT PLEASE
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 31, 2006
    hooot write more
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  • From ANON - oakley on July 26, 2006
    awesome! PLS continue!
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  • From ANON - oakley on July 26, 2006
    awesome! PLS continue!
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