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Reviews for Plundering of the Heart

By : Hippiechick7897
  • From ANON - sleepym on January 03, 2007
    Hi Hippiechick! I'm new to the fan fiction thing and was browsing around when I found your story. I don't know how long ago you wrote it but I wanted to send you a note anyway. I loved it! I usually don't ready long stories== life's just too hectic, but I found myself just transfixed and could not wait to get to the next chapter! You have a gift for writing! I read part of it on my cell phone while getting the kids to sleep; even took it with me to the bathroom because I didn't want to put it down! Then had to take a brief break and finished it up on my computer-- can read faster there. So, anyway, thanks for the great adventure and I'll be looking for more of your writing!

    Sleepym
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  • From ANON - Suriya on October 29, 2006
    Thank You! Lovely story indeed.
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  • From ANON - msvanessa on October 23, 2006
    Lovely story. :D
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  • From ANON - Boston1773 on October 18, 2006
    I love the story! Are there more chapters? Please? :)
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  • From ANON - Michiru Kaiou on October 06, 2006
    Whew!!! Is it hot in here??
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  • From ANON - Suriya on October 04, 2006
    Oh sooo HOT!
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  • From ANON - MsVanessa on October 04, 2006
    Absolutely LOVING this story. You're a fabulous writer.

    Why am I suddenly attracted to Norrington?!
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  • From ANON - Suriya on October 01, 2006
    Things are proceeding in the right direction,
    but why on earth James denies his touch, when all we want
    is him losing his control again... sigh...
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  • From ANON - Michiru Kaiou on October 01, 2006
    AH! LOVE IT! The best Norrington/OC fic I've read, honestly. I started tonight and finished Ch. 18 and thought I was caught up, only to discover that you had just posted Ch. 19! A wonderful surprise :) Also, I like that you didn't wait forever for the sex scene! You cut to the chase... thank you! Can't wait for another one, haha.
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  • From ANON - Moose on September 19, 2006
    Finally the confrontation WOOO!! I can't wait for the next chappy update now!!!
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  • From ANON - Suriya on September 17, 2006
    Hello again! I'm really looking forward the moment, when James comes to rescue me..
    *ahem* I mean her... :)
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  • From ANON - Steph on September 08, 2006
    This story is so good. I never used to like Norrington in that way but your story has made me hot for him. ;) PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEEEEASE continue soon. I'm on the edge of my seat here.
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  • From ANON - moose on September 06, 2006
    Elise isn't a Mary Sue don't worry OMR finally Cap'n Jack Sparrow's in ze story WOOOO update soon
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  • From ANON - kaitlyn on September 05, 2006
    oh, luverly chappie, as always! i haven't been reviewing, but i've been following your story quite obsessively...ahem, i meant 'closely.' a Mary-Sue, is a pathetic little person with no personality and is a terrible main character. or she's a protagonist who's gorgeous, perfect at everything, and all the men are in love with her. At least, that'a the most common definition. Most of the "experts" i know cry "MARY-SUE!" whenever the main female role falls in love with any of the main characters, which makes it a bit difficult to write a romance, don't u think? Anywho, i don't think you have much to worry about, although there probably are people out there who would scream "MARY-SUE!!" at the top of their lungs, simply because she and our dear commodore fell in love. well, i hope i helped without rambling on too much:) write more please! i'm anxiously awaiting the next chappie!
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  • From ANON - Unwritten on September 05, 2006
    A mary-sue is a "perfect" character. She usually gets hooked up with main characters such as Jack Sparrow - or in this case, James Norrington. She is flawless and beautiful and everyone is jealous of her but she isn't snotty about it. Etc, etc, etc. But your Miss Gold is a developed character, and actually has background and thought put into her, so she's an exception. Pairings with main characters can be tastefully done, as your story proves.

    AND FINALLY, JACK SPARROW! -snuggles Jack...and James ^^-
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