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  • From ANON - Anon on July 31, 2006
    Hurry...J/E sooo close!! Write *cracks whip* WRITE!
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  • From ANON - annie on July 30, 2006
    OMG UPDATE!! :O :O
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  • From ANON - Lorax on July 30, 2006
    Please, miss, I want some more :)
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  • From Lovergal on July 30, 2006
    Well goodness me! That chapter really heated things up, very exciting. Well-written and you're dong an excellent job with the characters' inner thoughts. My absolute favorite part being Jack's confrontation with Norrington. It was so much fun to read him guaging Jack's reactions to the news of Elizabeth's recent marriage. Plus, you did a fantastic job of writing Jack during that scene - his pauses and body language were so much more telling than any admission of desire for Elizabeth would have been. And that subtle little 'well well..' at the end was just lovely. Oh the angst! I love it.
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  • From ANON - Raven on July 27, 2006
    OMG!! This is great!! You are doing a really good job at writting Jack. Not many people seem to be.
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  • From ANON - shatteredmind on July 26, 2006
    thanks for the link! You can e-mail me sometime at forgottenblankie@yahoo.com, if you like.
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  • From ANON - jadexms on July 23, 2006
    Another great chapter. You seem to have Jack down very well. Looking forward to your next installment.
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  • From ANON - shatteredmind on July 23, 2006
    Aw, a chapter dedicated to me and Ladypirate! And yet I was such a lackadaisy reader and missed your updates for about a week! Sorry! I loved how you brought Norrington in - I have a huge thing for Jack and a little something for Norrington as well, you see! But nevermind that, I loved how Jack was being all pirate-y and took the ship right under the Commodore's nose. All very exciting and well-done and leaves me excited for more.
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  • From ANON - shatteredmind on July 23, 2006
    Just catching up on this story - chapter 3 - I really enjoyed your chracterization of Barbossa. And liked the part where you mentioned Elizabeth began to 'dislike him less...'. He certainly was sniffing around! Also nice was how you brought up the fact that the compass wouldn't work for Jack. Why? Look forward to how your story addresses that, if you so chose.
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  • From on July 22, 2006
    Ohh, this is good. When are we gonna see some Jack/Elizabeth action? Pretty please soon? *
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  • From ANON - Alzadea on July 22, 2006
    Really good story, true to the characters! I eagerly await more!
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  • From ANON - Jes on July 21, 2006
    Great story, and I'll be watching for updates.
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  • From EvilE on July 21, 2006
    Those two chapters were nice, very nice indeed. You're doing great with the dialogue and characters, keeping it light while wrestling with the serious issues... I love your Norrington! God bless me, I just love Norry, period. He has some of the BEST lines in PotC1, and was hilarious in PotC2 (and better looking!) Your Norry is proper-British and oh so yummy. Not easy to write a sequel to DMC, is it? Got a lot of plotlines to pick up, have you? You're doing a great job, keep it up. The humor is great too. Your mission: Keep writing and in doing so increase the respectability of aff.net!

    And... WHERE'S JACK????
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  • From on July 21, 2006
    WONDERFUL...I always do love a good Jack/Elizabeth fic. Hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - jadexms on July 20, 2006
    I love it so far. Very well written with a great plot so far...looking forward to more, thanks for writing.
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