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Reviews for The Evil Lady E

By : EvilE
  • From ANON - jadexms on July 22, 2006
    Absolutely loved it. It moved along very well. I actually prefer longer stories, but only if they're tightly written and the plot moves along coherently, which this did in spades. LOVED it.

    One confusion though, when Jack is confronting Elizabeth in the brig, and she pulls his gun from him and pulls the trigger (when he says it's not loaded), is the gun aimed at Jack? I couldn't tell from the story, the directionality of the gun, and I just didn't see Elizabeth actually shooting Jack in cold blood like that. If your intent was she was just testing the gun, away from Jack, to see if it was loaded, my apologies.

    Thanks so much for writing, looking foward to your next piece.

    Jadexms
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  • From LadyNightshade on July 21, 2006
    I absolutely loved this story.

    Once again, your way with words is positively amazing. But can't you give me a happy ending, just once? *grin*
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  • From ANON - a boat on July 21, 2006
    you are so wonderful with details and plot that it made this little detail stand out. "red Navy uniform," The navy wears blue, not red. The marnies who are army men on ships wear red. Otherwise, this is a well written story. ( I like the detail of the grog)
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  • From SinisterChic on July 21, 2006
    I've only read the first chapter but I am blown away. Wow!
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  • From ANON - Sokudo on July 21, 2006
    Sequel? Yes, please. :D There is so not enough good sexy hawt J/E fic to be easily found, in my opinion.
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  • From ANON - Marah on July 21, 2006
    Great, bloody fantastic. I loved it. It seemed so ... realistic, as if it could actually happen in the third. Well, if only it weren't a Disney movie.
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  • From ANON - Megan on July 20, 2006
    You are bloody brilliant. The way you craft the relationship between Jack and Elizabeth in this story is, first of all, thoroughly entertaining, but also very realistic. This story feels like the movie (with an NC-17 rating, of course). PLEASE write more - power struggles are fun, as long as Jack wins in the end :)
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  • From ANON - Michelle on July 20, 2006
    Wow. Again, wow.

    Didn't expect that ending - god, it was all so intense and sexy and cruel! You do a fantastic Jack. Elizabeth was a cold bitch, but you gotta love it. Would've like to have read Jack's thoughts being more possessive and murderous at the end, but it was more interesting the way you handled it. Well done. Please write more J/E!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 19, 2006
    I LOVED this story. I so didn't see the heathen god thing at the end! I would be very excited to see a sequel! The Pearl must return! :-D
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  • From ANON - TheAngelOfSilence on July 19, 2006
    Thank you so much for these four fantastic chapters, a truly awesome update! They made my day!
    I love your portrayal of Jack, I can hear him saying the things you write in my head! And yay for the swordfights!
    Of course, I wanted Elizabeth to dump Will and be with Jack, can't Will be got rid of somehow? [lol!]
    I really love your Jack/Elizabeth stuff, I only wish there were more in the fandom, and I shall certainly be reading anything else you write!
    A great, great job!
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  • From Lovergal on July 19, 2006
    My oh my! That last chapter was so much more than I would have KNOWN to wish for in the ending scene.

    You picked the sexual tension right back up as if they hadn't just paused to fight a sneaky serpent/god-thingie. I love how you didn't make them gush. They *still* had their differences that brought that certain spark to the sex. And yet, you played on that whole 'peas in a pod' theme and the similarities were sexy as well (the fact that Elizabeth wanted it as much as he, no shirking violet was she, and that was so in keeping with her character throughout the story - the one I'd come to really, really like!). The dialogue was fast, exciting as well. GAWD, I just want to go through and pick out my favorite lines and post them in a review but there were so many! The sex had my toes curling as well as well as had me enjoying it on a deeper, darker level. The ending was very nice, something about torturing poor Jack, J/E not quite together - leaves you with a slightly bitter, tantilizing taste. Your ideas for a sequel are terrific. I really hope you do write that - wow, we would get a little of everything there, wouldn't we? A little Evil E., a little of happily ever after J/E, a little angsty and separted J/E. /fangirly gushing
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  • From ANON - Stixie on July 19, 2006
    Yes yes yes. Continue. Don't want it to be over. So good. Can't use proper english... thats how good.
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  • From ANON - cks on July 19, 2006
    this story floored me, and i can't wait for the sequel. you're very good
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 19, 2006
    There it is. that was brilliant thankyou!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 19, 2006
    this si so good, but where'd that last chapter go? It was there and then I lost it.
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