Click Here!

Reviews for Devil's Bargain

By : EvilE
  • From LadyNightshade on July 17, 2006
    “You'll not betray Will, again. The way I see it, you've betrayed him twice, an' me twice, which seems to make it his turn again.”

    This is an absolutely fantastic line and SUCH a good example of Captain Jack's personality and style of speech.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - solangee on July 17, 2006
    I love you.
    You're simply amazing.
    Wow.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - heather on July 17, 2006
    Utterly brilliant. I was blown away.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Gabrielle (RandomJackass) on July 17, 2006
    Edgy and excellently written. Not fluffy at all. The best one I've read on this websit.e :)
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Jess on July 16, 2006
    this fic is truly wonderful. i love it! more please! *puppy dog eyes*
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Shad on July 16, 2006
    This fic makes me pretty darned happy. Nice job; fun ride. Hope you'll add more or write another piece in the series.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon. on July 16, 2006
    Hands down, the best characterization of Capt. Jack Sparrow I've ever read. Just enough details to spark the imagination, but not too much to make the fic crude and vulgar. Also, props on writings skills (as in using correct grammar) and on word choice (great vocabulary).
    Report Review

  • From ANON - annie on July 15, 2006
    aahhhhh, moore!!!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Nyssa on July 15, 2006
    THis was gorgeous! I love everything about it!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Lyria on July 14, 2006
    Alright, I take back everything bad I said in my review of 'Sweet Revenge'. This was fantastic- I really enjoyed it. The love aspect was a real shock but it fitted so well- perfect. Please continue writing!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anni on July 13, 2006
    Satisfying!! A great writer, especially dislogue. I did note that Will never answered Elizabeth's question about the 'whore's trick.' What's he hiding???
    Report Review

  • From ANON - shatteredmind on July 13, 2006
    Sheeesh, woman, this was perfectly wonderful! I loved the build up, and the touches of humor, the banter, the angst, just well..everything. Oh can't forget the sex, that was so darn good it almost hurt. :)

    You write Jack's dialogue so well. I can almost hear his movie-voice voiceover while reading those lines. You did a great job with the general pirate chat as well, it read like it sounds and didn't seem choppy. Your writing is terrific - how do you do it so fast? And without a beta. I just have to squee aobut that too.

    My favorite parts were the cabin scenes, of course, but not only because of the sex, but the banter between Jack and Elizabeth, plus inner dialogue and some very well done body language really 'made' those scenes for me. Of course, when Jack was acting vulnerable and telling Elizabeth he wanted her more than anything, just for one night even, I almost swooned. And when he asked her to tell him she loved him, that added a depth to the actual sex scene that made me swoon a second time. You brought the romance! Thank you for writing a sequel. Will there be inspiration for a third tryst between the two? *hopes*
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on July 13, 2006
    Oh that was so damn hawt! I loved it, really I loved it! Jack and Lizzie for ever!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Heat on July 13, 2006
    Hey there!

    Incredibly well written story.....and perfect timing to write it as I'm sure you know. I haven't read a Jack/Elizabeth fic this hot in a while tho....great job!
    Elizabeth truly is a devious girl. Pirate true enough

    Write more stories if they strike your fancy.....I will definately read them!
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!