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Reviews for The Kiss

By : Lovergal
  • From ANON - LadyPirate on July 10, 2006
    Take your time with that PWP you said you're working on! No rush. We've got a year till World's End comes out. I happen to be amidst a sequel to Sweet Revenge, so thanks for the encouragement and keep yer eyes peeled. Avast!
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  • From EvilE on July 10, 2006
    (Can't one respond directly to reviewers?) I know my story ends evilly, but I did put "UST" in the summary :-) I think I will write another one, later, but I think there needs to be some kind of story to take place, and now I've shackled myself to this whole virgin thing. If I solve it I'll post, for sure. Thanks! Maybe you should write one.
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  • From EvilE on July 10, 2006
    Thanks for your comment on mine, also. Actually, I read your fic last night and sat down and wrote "Sweet Revenge". Thanks for the inspiration. The kiss was hot. So rude, though. Wow, you realized over 600 people have read your fic? People are desperate, DESPERATE, for J/E! Sigh. Shame it's a Disney movie. :-)
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  • From ANON - Liz Navarro on July 10, 2006
    this was great!!!! You should write another one!
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  • From ANON - Mari on July 09, 2006
    That's exactly how I hope it was! Damn was that a beautiful kiss. It came out of nowhere in the movie though.. even if I had been begging for it since the beginning of the first one, lol. I felt so sad for Jack, because it was like he had a taste of something he had never had before.. :( Hopefully we will have something to celebrate in the third film.
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  • From ANON - mandi on July 09, 2006
    Good job! I just got back from my 2nd time seeing this. I liked how well you've captured Jack.
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  • From ANON - Vicki on July 09, 2006
    Just got back from the movie. Thank you sooo much for writing this.
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  • From ANON - Exoticbellydancer on July 09, 2006
    I loved this fic, I've always known there was a hidden chemistry between them, and when they kissed I was soooooo happy! This describes it perfectly, I can't wait for the world's end, hehehehe.
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  • From rayduke on July 09, 2006
    Aww come on, it's not like Jack didn't know what she was doing when she started to kiss him. But the lust between them throughout the movie can be measured in buckets. And I'll bet money that Jack even knows Will saw. They can't leave us like that! Greatest movie ever! PotC: At World's End, coming next year! Okay movie analysis over, rampant fanboy mode deactivated. Ahem

    Very well done. It's well written, well timed. If I could still recommend stories, I'd recommend this one.

    "Pirate"

    Peace and blessings
    -The Psycho Duck
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  • From pennymellow on July 09, 2006
    Well done! I'm a huge Sparrabeth fan and that kiss drove me so crazy. The sexual tension between those two...it was as though the writers had peeped into the brains over ever Sparrabeth fan in existence.

    Enough about the movie.

    This flash was really well done. Good work. Jack's introspective moments are written very nicely indeed, though some of your descriptions seem a bit clumsy. Lovely, none-the-less. I'd like to see a sister story to this one, one that shares Elizabeth's thoughts.
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  • From ANON - Immolation on July 09, 2006
    Yes! YES! Y-E-S!! I have been clamoring about the kiss all of yesterday and today... Yes, indeed, Elizabeth did it to save the rest of the crew, but throughout the previous scenes in the film, you could see ther chemistry between her and Jack, and Jack's smart-ass smirk after she kissed him. I was hoping for a fanfic with this pairing (it really seems to be rare on here), and lo and behold, I got it. Nice story. :D Pls write more..
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