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Reviews for The Last Temptation

By : CuxW
  • From darkangel985 on May 10, 2007
    *cries* I thought there was a new chapter, when I saw the story in the Latest section, but sadly there wasn't *cries some more*
    Are you going to finish this sometime? It would be really sad to see such a wonderful story remain unfinished.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 06, 2007
    Interesting story, I'm hoping you'll continue writing the remaining days.
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  • From ANON - NaturalLogarithm on April 02, 2007
    Have I mentioned lately how glad I am that you're back up and writing? My next fic won't be something you'll like, but maybe after that, I'll finally finish your Little China Girl challenge.
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  • From darkangel985 on March 14, 2007
    You updated and I only just noticed, but anyway it was once again a magnificent chapter.
    I love the idea with the wings at the cafe and both Hannibal and Will looking at them. The dream sequence was also very hot and nicely written.
    But what I liked most of all, mostly because it made me grin was Clarice's "His and Hannibal’s story wasn’t filled with the wickedness, the closeness or the heat and the secrecy hers had been." If only she knew the truth.
    I'm definitely looking forward to another update and I can't wait for Hannibal to finally meet Will.


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  • From ANON - Lina on February 20, 2007
    Oh My FReaking God, this is the best Han/Will fic I HAVE EVER READ!!!!! I love the turmoil and the passion!!!
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  • From ANON - tenshi on February 20, 2007
    "There was no escaping, so he might as well drink The Good Doctor down and enjoy him..."
    this line had me laughing. Probably due to my dirty mind.
    Thanx for the update. I love Will/Lecter fics.
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  • From ANON - Arche De Katze on February 18, 2007
    oh please keep writing. this is too good of a story to just stop.
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  • From ANON - Hannah Miller on February 11, 2007
    AMAZING
    you hear that?
    AMAZING!

    i love it, please don't have dropped it

    much suspense,
    H
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  • From ANON - PxW on August 13, 2006
    I like the story, so far so good. Thank for writing this story. :)
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  • From darkangel985 on August 08, 2006
    Another delightful chapter!
    Things are finally heating up a bit and I love that you make Will somewhat demanding. He almost orders Hannibal to visit him and that is definitely something new.
    The only thing that would have been nice to have would be if you had described Will's dreams a little more. But otherwise it is a great inspiring new chapter.
    Keep up the good work,
    darkangel985
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  • From darkangel985 on August 02, 2006
    Wonderful!
    I especially love the way you mix Will's memories and dreams. Your characterization is still as great as in the first chapter, the mixture of sanity and madness you let Will display very convincing.
    I'm looking forward to more updates, since I can't wait to know how Hannibal will react to Will's letter and so on. You got me hooked, so keep up the good work.
    darkangel985
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  • From ANON - Raven Black on August 02, 2006
    Very wonderful story so far! Poor Will. Hopefully hannibal will help him with his problems. Can't wait for more
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  • From ANON - ~*Q*~ on August 02, 2006
    ^__^ As promised, here it appeared!

    I'm glad I could be that driving foot in your ass. *Eye roll* Anyways, keeping posting and maybe I'll call you back one of these days. (...or at least type up that RW thing for you. La!)

    Anyhow, I suppose I can't comment much on characterization, seeing as I'm still ignorant in the ways of Will and Han, but I will say your writing is delightfully wonderful and insane, as always. (I almost had the whim to call it 'delicious,' wouldn't that just be fitting?)

    Continue your writing dear or else.

    I know where you live.

    ~*Q*~
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  • From darkangel985 on July 10, 2006
    I'm so happy that you posted the first chapter. Now to some serious reviewing:

    The characterizations are awesome. Especially your characterization of Crawford because you make him seem like a really inconsiderate bastard, who just uses agents when he needs them. Will's anger really adds to that picture. I also liked the whole part where Will thinks about insanity and his brushes with it. He's just got all these emotions pent up inside and they are just waiting to break free.

    I'm absolutely looking forward to more of this. So I wish you lots of creativity and hope that I'll see more of your writing soon.

    darkangel985
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  • From Stoeffl on July 10, 2006
    You wrote the first chapter! Thank you so much for taking the time and writing your story down. There is not nearly enough out there in the Red Dragon Fandom.

    Now, let me review the chapter. I really like the opening this chapter gives. I think that you did a great job on introducing us to the different players and you showed us as well how they interact. I like your Will. He is so angry with Crawford and with the Bureau. I believe all of us would be angry if others had used us for their purposes time and time again. I also liked the way you showed us Will's thoughts on the going ons. I am curious to learn what Hannibal thinks about all of this,

    Concerning fast driving and Crawford, I have to admit that I am one of these people who usually drive app. 100 miles/hour (160 km/h where I am from). I know that you should not do that but I am a fast driver. Unfortunatly. Strangely enough the only accident I have been in so far happened when I was driving 3 miles/hour in a traffiv jam. *shakes head* That's me being shtoopid. Crawford as he is described in your story is actually very different from the Crawford we'll get to see in my second story 'All the King's Horses' But you'll see in my next chapter which ought to be up some time next week.

    Thank you for you great work and please keep on getting up from your bed and sitting down on your chair to write the stories you come up with.

    Take care,

    Simarillion
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