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Reviews for Predator: SVU

By : prairiefire
  • From Carajbu on January 18, 2007
    I was wondering if you were going to continue with this. I'm so glad you did, and if it means waiting a month for an update I can do that.
    Wow...I wonder what will happen at the confrontation. I have a feeling SOMEONE is going to die. Just hope it won't be one of our beloved characters. I mean, your beloved characters lol. :)

    I've probably already told you this, but you have an amazing skill for writing. I love the little steps that gradually increase the bond between Cass and Vek...I honestly expected them to be fucking by now but the sex scene will be even more hot because we've been waiting so long for it. Not that it's a bad thing. This isn't a PWP, thank God. I couldn't imagine a writer like you wasting your talents.
    Anyway, it's not a bad thing that their bonding accurs gradually. It's very realistic. I mean, Vek is an alien and in chapter 16 I believe ,he finally showed her his face. So of course they're not going to get down and dirty after a paragraph or something. Cass experienced emotional trauma and the fact that Vek was there to support her means that they'll eventually find love, [if that happens], it won't just be a one night stand. That's very important for me. A good story like yours gives time for character development, plot development, relationships and such. Just wanted to congratulate you on that. You win definitely win points in my book. :)
    Again, I'm so sorry for your loss. You can't be superwoman and have the motivation to write while you're depressed. I completely understand. I go months without even looking at my book because I have no motivation to write. If this was a crappy story I would have abandoned it by now, with all of the long periods of waiting. But what writer doesn't experience writers block/depression? That's ABNORMAL. Lol.
    Gah. I either write too little in a review or too much. I'm practically writing my own story here hah.
    -Cara
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  • From DeathGodDist on January 18, 2007
    Ah, I am so very pleased that you have returned (hopefully in better spirits) to continue your fine story. I am so enjoying how you are building things up for what should be quite the entertaining confrontation ahead. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing how all of this plays out indeed. :)
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  • From Shalimar on January 17, 2007
    Finally! I really like the interaction between your two hunters. I found Vek'rin'ka making armor for Cass and his twinge of sorrow at Sonya's death especially touching. The hunt itself is shaping up to be a real showdown with all the major players heading for the same place. Please don't wait so long to post next time!!!
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  • From ANON - dragon85 on December 09, 2006
    Continue please!!
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  • From ANON - aquamum on November 25, 2006
    Excellent update.
    i love your story.
    Good to see them becoming closer - I love she sleeps on his stomach
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on November 25, 2006
    As happy as I am to see that you have updated...I do have to say that I feel your loss. I am a vet tech, so I know what you have just been through. It is very hard to think of anything else while something like that is happening. My heart goes out to you and your family. :)
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on November 24, 2006
    I'm sorry to hear about your Lucky. I hate to think about losing my Lucky dog. We consider him to be our first child. Animals have always held a special place in my heart too and it's never easy when they go.

    Take care of yourself wont you, I shall be thinking of you.

    I loved this chapter, love the story. Vek and Cass interact well and I'm with Cara, your plot is great.

    *Hello room service. Can I have one life-sized predator pillow to my room please?*
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  • From ANON - Cara on November 24, 2006
    YAAAY. An update!!
    Vek is starting to feel more protective towards Cass, and now they're going to hunt the Bad Blood. Interesting, interesting. Oh this plot is greeeeeeatttt. I love it. You're such a talented writer.
    And I am so sorry about your dog. :/
    Losing is a pet is like losing a human best friend. I know, my cat I had for seven years died awhile ago. Took me a few months to stop crying every time I thought of him. Time will heal this wound, and I hope you'll be okay.
    -Cara
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  • From ANON - Death God Dist on November 24, 2006
    Wow, I had feared that this great story had been abandoned after so long without an update.

    While I am glad you were finally able to come back to it, I am saddened to hear about your loss. It really sucks to lose such a close pet, and at this time of the year too. I wish you the very best in recovering from it.

    I still love this story nonetheless, and the interactions between Cass and Vek are simply awesome. I can't wait for the next chapters, however long they may take.
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  • From ANON - Cara on November 07, 2006
    I haven't forgottten about this story either, and am glad your muse has shown up!
    What do you mean there's not much left to this story?
    :(
    *tear*
    Cara no want good story to end.

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  • From prairiefire on October 09, 2006
    Hi people! Let me just say I have good news and bad news.

    Good news first. I have not given up on this story. Yay!!!!

    Bad news. I have given up on Chapter 16. I decided that I didn't like what I had written so far so I ripped it out of my notebook and threw it in the garbage. So I am not quite starting from scratch. But between the crud happening at work and looking for a new job it's going to be a while for an update. Hang tight, there's not much left to the story.
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  • From ANON - Lorna on October 02, 2006
    Update when you can with sugar on top
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  • From Airporter on September 28, 2006
    Nice story. I will be looking for the next update.
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  • From karmaxp on September 26, 2006
    oh come on you know Vek HATES Cass! :) No really I like how they are progressing please continue
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  • From ANON - aquamum on September 22, 2006
    Another excellent chapter.
    You story continue to be very interesting - well done !!!!!!!
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