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From ANON - The riddler riddles on December 16, 2006
Hey circle what is worse than having a flamer?

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Having one that can not spell. Come on sequal? Dude are you spelling it like it sounds or something. You have the nerve to criticize others for grammar and spelling.
***shaking head
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From ANON - Death God Dist on December 16, 2006
Heh, if circle's writings are a source of unpleasantness for you sir, then I certainly am hoping she keeps it up for as long as she can. :)

More praise from me, since I've gone back and re-read some of the chapters in light of the story change. I dunno if you had planned the latest twist a while back, but even if you didn't it shows how well your writing is that you can make it into a believable situation and not come off as forced. Example, the Jafren seemed to imply something bad for Kayla in the future when talking about her "fate", and then there's Tanoj's former cute introduction of being the son of Shlok and Kayla, which has now turned into a call for death, and he now using her cause of death (the fatal injury) to kill others.

Oh well, I - and most sane people here - am so glad you will keep writing, I can't wait for the first chapter of Part III :)
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From ANON - Artwzrd7 on December 15, 2006
My bad! I forgot that notation of their joining for a hour of no smutty details. You tease. I had visions of Shlok riding Kayla's curves while recieving a Leena full body massage or draped down the lenth of his back while he rode Kayla. Now that would be hot. Too hot....and kinky. Great story Again. Can't sing your praises enough to readers. I have feasted on your words and am satisfied.
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From ANON - Death God Dist on December 15, 2006
From what I gathered from the teaser. Kayla's death took place at least 100 years after the final chapter of Part II (as indicated, it had been that long since Shra'van had moved to Lex's ship, which had yet to take place at the end of Part II), and therefore, the next chapter will take place 100 years (according to Ta'noj's memory) after her death, meaning about 200 years after Part II.

I would have suspected Kul'vir if he wasn't dead, so my money is on Ne'el or someone close to him, though I have a feeling it will be someone completely unexpected.

Oh well, RIP Kayla, you gave us great times :) I wonder how well Sh'lok was able to move on?
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From ANON - Nuffsaid on December 15, 2006
How come Kayla had to die? Didn't even get to mate Shlok with Leena. All she got was his digits no pun intended. Sorry, still don't like Leena. Great storytelling!

Another human entering the saga maybe? Tanoj is not bad blood, just hunting down human killers for his human mother?! What of it, I say. Hope he isn't, and rather protecting his mother's people from human haters.

Why Kulvir dead? Did he die trying to protect Kayla? I had hoped he'd find love before he died. Can't wait to find out.
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From ANON - Artwzrd7 on December 15, 2006
Poor Tanoj. Awww Shlok may need more than
leena can give him emotionally. Will her friend step in to console him? Leena's son jealous of the others having Kayla as mother, or inherited crazy? That rapist's surviving brother kill kulvir and Kayla for starting this all in motion by meeting? Jealous females getting another to do dirty work? With Kayla and her mate Kulvir gone one certain Shlok pinning female might have her chance to replace Kayla? A member of Ne'el's family? Bastard son of Shlok jealous or offended by connection to an "inferior" species? Or upset Tanoj part Human has the lovely Kavita? The Eta Kala corrected when first met Lokesh? So many possible motives and players like a who done it novel to come? I'm rambling as usual. Bless you for doing another. Kayla will be missed.
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From ANON - circle of addictions on December 15, 2006
thanks Death God Dist!
It is completely different and Ba'naj is in it.
I love the Keanu faces!
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From ANON - Death God Dist on December 15, 2006
Ok, first off, a nice final chapter to this part of the saga. Tied everything up nicely and set the stage for your next story arc (you say it will be the final story, but again, hopefully it won't be the last thing you write :) ).

Now then, about the teaser, *puts on Keanu Reeves face* "Whoa...."

Damn, talk about a complete 180 as well as quite the stunning turnabout. Killing off the main character, making the lovable son into a crazed bad blood, and who knows what else (you mentioned Kul'vir also dieing, that'll be interesting to see). A testament to your writing is emoting the pain the characters felt in Tan'oj's short flashback. Well, I definitely cannot wait to read that story and see what went down. Though I do hope Ban'aj does make an appearance. Pervy-Yautja must survive! :)

At the very least, one certainly cannot say that you have not breathed new life into the story (through death, hehe)
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From ANON - Death God Dist on December 11, 2006
I hate to give this guy more attention than he deserves (which is none), but I couldn't help but laugh at the fact that the only story he's even remotely had a good liking to is "mating seasons". I think that speaks for itself quite well.

Anyway, back on topic. Story is awesome, Ba'naj kicks ass, and I hope you never stop writing. :)
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From Keen on December 11, 2006
Baxter, you unbelievable wanker, I pulled my story because I didn�t like being a lightening rod for all your negativity. So blame me.

Your right, you should be able to speak your mind about posts, but there is a way to do it. You don�t have to be so cutting and caustic! Why can�t you appreciate that? People don�t like to be told, �You suck� at every turn. Be decent. Be a man.

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From ZenRose on December 11, 2006
***giving baxter a big ole hug and kiss!!*
because I know you love the sweets!
wait until you read the end.
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From ANON - Death God Dist on December 11, 2006
Damn, if you don't like it, don't read it. If you have nothing constructive to say, don't say anything at all. Clearly you have issues if you feel the need to make such a useless statement as a public review, when it would be better off as a private e-mail, since you clearly have some sort of grievance with the author. Of course, that would have required some simple intelligent thinking on your part, which by your history, you have great difficulty doing.

Anyway, I doubt circle or anyone else will take a word you say seriously after this (not that they took you seriously to begin with).

And circle, most of us here can't wait to read your final chapter, and whatever other writings you will hopefully come up with in the future.
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From ANON - Baxter9696 on December 11, 2006
*laughin*

what *is* this crap?

everything is going so fast to being tied up ina neat little sugary bow! its so sugary its good thing no one is diabetic.i think 'gentlemango' is making fun of YOU.
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From ANON - Mal'fan on December 09, 2006
And the big balls of the year goes to.... Shra'van! lol
I think he is more gutsy than any of them. And I do feel a part three. Please let there be a part three. Shra'van causing havoc on Scar and Lex ship. Lee'na is a curious one. I think if she likes you then you are fine but if she has issues with you then you should watch your back. She went psycho on Ne'el and his mate, which I thought was well deserved since her one year punishment last twenty five years. I just love this story and I find myself thinking about your characters and their situations. I hate to see it end!
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From ANON - Artwzrd7 on December 06, 2006
Guess Leena is staying...for now? She should have apologized, then I would've felt a little different about her for what she attempted if by principle only. If not his mate than to the child. Ne'el should've apologized to Leena for the role he played in it. I had actually grown reluctantly fond of him in that other version despite the creepy fetish thing. Okay so dominating your mate isn't that freaky these days.

Shlok needs to watch out, Leena is still dangerous. Maybe she has changed...brain not accepting data, but I will try to make that leap of faith. One day he'd need someone like her cause humans don't live as long as them. Since Kayla chose her, I'll try to be happy for that creepy little wench. Shlok's loving is working miracles. So is this author I now bow to. Almost over...say it ain't so! Hopefully, maybe grace us with another story with new characters, or Lex and Scar? I can only hope.Hint.
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