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Reviews for Human Hunter 2

By : ZenRose
  • From ANON - Cathy2u on July 11, 2006
    Oh my goodness! Dang that was good! MORE RITUALS! So if Ba'naj have three mates how did that one go? Flashback perhaps? Kul'vir has a monkey on his back.
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  • From ANON - Nahaja on July 11, 2006
    Damn that was a good chapter. I hate to be such a perv but, will anything happen between Leena and Kayla? This chapter was awesome update soon!
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  • From prairiefire on July 10, 2006
    Two words...HOT DAMN.
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  • From ANON - Artwzrd7 on July 10, 2006
    That was....Hottt! Shl'ok handled his buisness like the pro he is. Though he may be challenged for her later surprise maybe it will be Kul'vir. The only way he can have her, really. Leena may become pregnant and get creepy obsessive again, once she thirsts for power of Kayla's position. What will happen when she sees Ne'el again but as a leader's mate? Will she do some underhanded crap to him, or will Kulvir attempt to seduce Shl'ok's new mate or befriend her to stay close to Kayla? I have no idea and that is why I love this story. This is Great stuff!!! Hottt!
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  • From ANON - Mal'fan on July 09, 2006
    DAMN, CAN IT GET ANY HOTTER!
    That was juicy. Now the question is Kayla and Ba'naj perhaps? Hmm
    I'm so hooked. I have to go back and read this chapter again. And Lo'kesh is a hard ass now!

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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on July 09, 2006
    Damn Girl!! You sure do know how to write. Some one needs to kick Kul'vir's ass. It should be Kayla. Definately! Can't wait for more, not so long this time?!
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  • From ANON - Brandon G. on July 06, 2006
    I check this site once a day for updates to your story. It is a soap opera and I'm hooked! I think Su'tara is going to be a handfull for poor Kayla.
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  • From ANON - Cathy2u on July 04, 2006
    Poor Kul'vir! Love is driving him crazy and now that Kayla is no longer friends with him he may really go off on the deep end!
    Ba'naj is scrumptious! Him and Kayla need a moment. Maybe at the ritual? Or will he prepare her again in the future?
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  • From ZenRose on July 03, 2006
    Since you have a headache I'll help you out :)
    I think Sh'lok will always love Kayla, though sometimes it may not come across as such (I'm no help huh)!
    devistating and argumentative... I don't think so... well, I do love drama... let me think...
    Nah :)
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  • From ANON - Kae'She on July 03, 2006
    i have a question please tell me sh'lock still loves kayla??? im confused i have a headache is this gonna end up kayla's whole family and her mate will hate her and she will leave for earth heart broken although i do love this fanfic i hope this isnt gonna be devistating and argumentative
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  • From ANON - Artwzrd7 on July 03, 2006
    Kayla is jealous from a kiss; an intimacy she thinks she cannot share with him. Kiss his mandibles girl..come on. She is going to regret this, especially when Shravan acts out. Leena may see Stephna as a threat. Great tension and angst. I see Shravan coming face to face with some of Lex's brood maybe? Something his little brother might appreciate better? Poor Kulvir in unrequitted love hell, with a splash of consuming jealousy on the side. I so want to console and slap some sense into him. I can't give up on him yet y'all! I love this story and the characters. Thanyou for updating.
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on July 02, 2006
    Yay! Another ritual! I love rituals. Bring on the ritual!!
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  • From prairiefire on July 02, 2006
    That Ba'naj is beginning to sound scrumtious. Sh'lok taking a second mate is something I didn't expect, with the possibility of a third (or was his talk with Kul'vir just an empty threat). Hmm, how is Kayla going to feel once she really does have to share.
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  • From ANON - Mal'fan on July 02, 2006
    My my my, Ba'naj is hot. Tell me a ritual is next! Oh Please!!!
    I love this story.You write out your drama and conflicks very well. MORE!!
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  • From ANON - Cara on June 29, 2006
    I read Hunter 1 & 2 and they are absolutely amazing. You have a lot of talent. Did you make up the mating rituals and some of the yautja behaviour or did you research it? Either way, the culture and society added greatly to the story. I was hooked.
    I love how each of your characters are so original! It's amazing.
    I love Sh'lok and Kayla...but I'm disappointed about Lee'na. I don't want Sh'lok to start feeling for her and abandon Kayla...or take her as a second mate or something....haha. That's how much I'm wrapped up in the plot. Sh'lok and Kayla are so perfect together...they have to last!!
    Please write the next chapter please please :(
    Shame on you and your story for making me beg! :P






    Pretty please?
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