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Reviews for River Rapids

By : jemstone5
  • From ANON - chancelor22 on May 25, 2006
    DAMN IT!!! How can you TEASE us like that? What are you doing? Trying to kill us? But, anywayz, I loved it! At least now I know they will finally get it on in the next chappy. After all this time, I think they deserve it! Can't wait...keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Prairiefire on May 25, 2006
    So, you've finally given up teasing El and are just teasing us. This is a very well written chapter (41) with lovely descriptions. I really don't want this story to end.
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  • From ANON - Anna on May 18, 2006
    *Slumps down in seat* That is evil. I believe I'm getting as frustrated as El. The gathering can't get here fast enough!! I am really loving this story! I'm sitting on the edge of my seat waiting to read what will happen next. *gets on her knees* Please update soon!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - prairiefire on May 18, 2006
    You are a very cruel writer. Tormenting and teasing El like that. Ver'On deserves the embarrasment of falling out of himself for what he and M'Pa have done to her. hehe.
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  • From ANON - raizer on May 18, 2006
    You are an excellent writer. It certainly isn't easy to describe a predator but your story is nicely descriptive where it needs to be. Really enjoyed it. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter....
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  • From ANON - caz on May 17, 2006
    grr. dammit.
    okay, hurry up with the damned gathering, you know how evil you're being, right?
    Sadness? a bedroom? what? damn.
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  • From ANON - missy on May 17, 2006
    wow loving this story please don't stop.
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  • From ANON - Tammatha on May 17, 2006
    Greetings,

    I just thought I should stop and tell you how much I am liking this story & to say keep up the good work!

    Bright blessings
    Tammatha
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  • From ANON - caz on May 17, 2006
    OH! YOU ARE CRUEL!
    goddamn it...
    all worked up and now I gotta wait for a bloody UPDATE!!!
    if they get interupted i'll scream, i swear.
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  • From ANON - Anna on May 15, 2006
    This story is EXCELLENT!! I can't stop reading it. El is such a brave woman. She really kicked those guys butts! I hope that she will be able to expose Ver'on's great grandfather for the bastered he is. Sol is a great character. We he got mad at El because he thought she lied I wanted to smack him, but it all worked out. I am sitting on the edge of my seat waiting to read what will happen next! Keep up the excellent work, and please keep those chapters coming!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on May 15, 2006
    YAY! I am so glad that everyone is OK. With all the twists, I was sure something bad was going to happen! I love this story. I can't to see what happens next. Waiting patiently...
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  • From ANON - jemstone5 on May 09, 2006
    as you all have probably seen, the log in section is a little off kilter. i have chapter 38 complete and ready for upload, and hopefully another chapter will be ready by the time the site allows us to log in again. just wanted to keep you eager beavers updated. take care. =)
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  • From ANON - Sara on May 09, 2006
    Oi! I can't log into my account! But at least I can leave reviews as a guest.

    Anyway, I am so glad you picked up on this story despite the database problems aff is having. I really hope other Predator fic authors follow suit and just carry their updates over to the new archive.

    This story is progressing very well, with some nice twists. I can't wait until you write 'the gathering' act. =)

    -Sara
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  • From ANON - prairiefire on May 03, 2006
    crying out loud, I was so worried it was Lee'tha that fell on the spear. i could see her doing it to protect her friend. while I am bummed that M'Pa got hurt, it kinda served him right for not being straight with Ver'On and El. yeah, for him for not dying, he is one strong yautja.
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  • From ANON - missy on May 03, 2006
    no that's just wrong but having M'pa be alright would make up for it. Please don't hold on the smut...really needing it here.
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