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Reviews for River Rapids

By : jemstone5
  • From ANON - Chancelor22 on June 06, 2006
    That was a great chapter. You sure do know how to make someone's heart drop and stop tho! Is M'Pa made of steel or something? He had better be. I will be very put out if he dies! Keep the updates coming!
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  • From ANON - michelle marshall on June 02, 2006
    this is one of the best stories i've read in a long time, please keep writing, you are fantastic at it. can't wait for the next chapters.
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  • From ANON - caz on June 01, 2006
    ahhh the plot thickens....

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  • From ANON - Anna on June 01, 2006
    Sorry in my excitement I realized that I can't spell with sh*t. I meant they're having a baby, but i think you get what I was saying. Now that I think about it. . . Fer'aza doesn't deserve J'on. But I leave that in your capable hands. *bows head* I forgot to say that I TOTALLY agree with Lee'tha about "the best of both worlds" comment. Mmmmmmm. Makes me wish I was on that ship with El!! This story kicks ass!! I absolutely love it. Keep it up! * Patiently sits by her computer waiting for the next chapter*
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  • From ANON - Anna on June 01, 2006
    Excellent chapter!! I was worried there for awhile. I really thought that Tan was going to try and persuaded El away from Ver'on. El is really lucky to have Lee'tha there with her. *Laughs* Fer'aza plan back fired on her, which was rather amusing to read! I wouldn't put it past her to try again, but it looks like El has some new friends to watch over her. I think Fer'aza should get over M'Pa and get with J'on. He seems like the perfect mate for her. Although she can't see it. I loved how you incoporated another Yautja having a human mate. I think it eased El's mind a bit. Speaking of that. . . THEIR HAVING A BABY!!!!!! *Jumps around the room* I'm so happy for them! I can't wait to read what happens next. I hope nothing bad happens. Please don't make me beg. I'm sitting on the edge of my seat. Please update soon!!! Also keep up the amazing job that you have been doing!!! *Grins*
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on May 31, 2006
    Suck eggs Fer'aza. She needs her high and mighty Yautja ass taken down a peg or two. And ditto on what Lee'tha said about mating one of mixed blood, I reckon you would get the best of both worlds MMMMM Yummy. I hope he takes some other Yautja female hotty and she sticks to Fer'aza as to what she missed out on.

    It's so good to see everyone coming back. And I WANT MORE PLEASE. From everyone not just you. Which reminds me I should pull my finger out too shouldn't I.
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on May 31, 2006
    Ha Ha! Throw it back in her face! I love to see ppls plans get ruined! That was great. I can't wait for more. This fic is what gets me thru the day!
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  • From ANON - Anna on May 31, 2006
    Oh no!! Why did El have to insist that M'Pa go with Ver'on? Now she's in great danger. I don't like Fer'aza. Someone really needs to put her in her place AGAIN!! I don't want to see El hurt or labeled something she's not, nor do I want to see Ver'on or M'Pa disgraced. And I sure as hell DON'T want to see M'Pa with that THING. I'm still hoping that M'Pa becomes El and Ver'on's second mate!!! Good chapter. I am really looking forward to reading more. I hope Ver'on and M'Pa don't stay away long. Keep it up, and please update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - missy on May 30, 2006
    love it, can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on May 30, 2006
    Three wonderful chapters! I loved every minute of it. And now, back to the twists and turns. I love the way you write. Are you going to do another fic after this one? I would really love it if you would. Anyway, I'm so glad everything is ok for now, but can't wait for the action to return! More!

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  • From ANON - Anna on May 30, 2006
    WOW!! That was a wonderful chapter! It was action packed, There was a brief moment when I thought that El was going to be hurt in the process. It's amazing that after all that teasing she finally got what she wanted, and now she's still not completely satisfied. I can't wait to read what will happen next. I think it would be wonderful if M'Pa became their second mate. Though I'm wondering if El really would like that, but she might after the pleasure she received at the gathering. It might be worth her wild! *grins* Hey, if she doesn't want M'Pa she could always send him my way!!! *Big smile and lustfull eyes* I'm sitting on the edge of my seat. Keep up the excellent work and please update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - caz on May 30, 2006
    *sigh*
    thank you...


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  • From ANON - chancelor22 on May 29, 2006
    WOW!!!!! THAT WAS SO INCREDIBLE! It was so good that it has left me speechless. I kinda feel like Ver'On! After a build up like that, I am thoroughly spent!! Congrats girl. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - caz on May 27, 2006
    aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahh! QUIT THAT!
    Your worse than M'pa! hahahahahaha
    update quickly.
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  • From ANON - Anna on May 26, 2006
    WOW!! What a chapter that was. El sure did put that female in her place. *giggles* I'm a bit surprised that she had that much control considering all the teasing being done to her. I thought she was going to rip that female's head off. *more giggles* I'm so happy that finally we have reached the gathering (next chapter she finally gets what she wants. . .right?) I'm GREATLY looking forward to the next chapter!!! Keep up the excellent work, and PLEASE update soon!!
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