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Reviews for River Rapids

By : jemstone5
  • From ANON - Chavela on June 24, 2006
    I am so very addicted to this story. I read Book One! It took me two days, with a break, and it is so freaking awesome! I normally read another kind of fanfiction, but I got bored and came over here and read the first one than ran over here to read the second book and this rocks. i am so wrapped in this. I can only hope though, that this second one ends just as good as the first one which rocked.

    This is awesome! And I will so be keeping up with this story for sure. Keep up the very awesome work, and I hope you keep this updated as frequently and possible and that your muse keeps working well! This rocks!

    ~PEACE~
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  • From ANON - Caz on June 21, 2006
    hahahaha, and here comes overprotective grandfather, gonna kick Tan's ass. LOL.
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  • From ANON - caz on June 20, 2006
    you don't stop there. that's evil.
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  • From ANON - tash on June 20, 2006
    please please update soon im so addicted to this story its not funny, thanks by the way for the cliffie - NOT
    But its a wicked story!
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  • From ANON - Artwzrd7 on June 18, 2006
    Maybe Ver'on didn't take her little admission too well. I mean he was okay with things as long as he had her heart. To know she secretly lusted for another male may have did damage that the fight made worse. She was slapping and hitting them...what?! When I read that I wanted to slap her myself. Remember readers he and M'pa discussed additional mates and his concern if El' could accept him mating other females to expand the clan's bloodline. Maybe that is one reason he won't talk of her cause he may come back with a little harem for his clan males to take as additional mates? I hope to find out. Well sad they are hurting. M'pa should be loved, and by a female whoed want him as her only mate. El' eluded to that in my opinion, but not directly. This story is really growing on me. (I got thrown in the beginning with the image of a sobbing male predator.) More.
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  • From prairiefire on June 17, 2006
    You know, that is just like a guy to help create a problem then run away. Shame on Ver'on. As if El doesn't have enough to deal with with him abandoning her when the going gets a little tough. Let's see him carry three kids at once. Not to mention leaving her with all the responsibilities of an elder's mate at the same time. As if she didn't have enough stress.

    Thank the gods for M'Pa. At least he is not out getting torn apart again (although I am sure that will happen later). He shouldn't worry, El loves him. I can't see her letting him go, especially with Ver'on being an arse.
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  • From ANON - cassiopeia on June 16, 2006
    mwahahah.
    full of babies and pissed off... males beware!
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  • From ANON - Lorna on June 16, 2006
    My mouse is so stupid I hate it!!! Anyway, I love the title and I am glad you combined the stories into one and started a new chapter in this saga of El. I have more time to read now so I will be reading this!! Isn't that great! Okay stop hiding behind the chair because I like your story and I can FINALLY read it. Keep writing!
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  • From prairiefire on June 12, 2006
    I was wondering when those hormones would kick in. Of course, they may send someone's foot into someone else's butt.

    Anxiously waiting the next update.
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  • From ANON - caz on June 12, 2006
    El's gonna do some ass-kicking? :D YAY!
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  • From ANON - michelle on June 11, 2006
    I can't wait for the next chapters, this story just keeps getting beter and better, keep writing you are fantastic!!!!!!!
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  • From prairiefire on June 08, 2006
    TRIPLETS!!!!! Are you serious? I said she deserved a baby, but man, a first-time mom with THREE newborns!, hybrids no less!! I so do(n't) want to see the mood swings that are coming. *impressed whistle*
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  • From ANON - Shortest_warrior on June 07, 2006
    I'm glad El didn't lose the baby and I can't wait until she tells Ver'on and M'pa. Kal needs to be seriously hurt for even thinking about taking El away from Ver'on. He wants to be very careful Ver'on will kick his ass and pity help when M'pa recovers.

    Please let El agree to M'pa being her second mate, PLEASE.


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  • From ANON - Prairiefire on June 07, 2006
    M'Pa is just a glutton for punishment isn't he. And females just can't stop themselves from fixing up couples can they. Kal is an idiot if he thinks that even on the slight chance that he defeated Ver'On AND M'Pa that El would have anything to do with him. I am sooo happy she is pregnant, she deserves this so much. I shudder to think what will happen once the baby's born if Fer'aza is still hung up on M'Pa. There could be fireworks there. Hopefully the Hur family has found a home. But it seems like there's "one" in every family. Kire'Baa, Fer'aza, always trying to make everyone else as miserable as them.

    This is one story that can never end, I won't allow it. It is just too good.
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on June 06, 2006
    Poor El. I hope Kal doesn't decide to stick his bit in to help. It is after all what he wants to do. Please let M'pa survive I'm gathering that is why his heart sank. But it's your story and I'll read it anyway. Please jemstone5 I want more.
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