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Reviews for River Rapids

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  • From ANON - Millen Stryker on August 14, 2006
    So that rat Heeno is finally showing his true colors. Hey Tan'ock, kill him or better yet make him confess before doing that.

    This is an awesome story and I hope you bring out the next chapter. I really hope El doesn't run into trouble, especially with that creep Bastian running loose and living.
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  • From karmaxp on August 10, 2006
    AWWW I do not think this was too sappy., but maybe I am sappy, I loved it and I want to see thoses babies born so update okay
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  • From ANON - shortest_warrior on August 07, 2006
    Yes! You updated. I don't think it was too sappy. Every story needs a little sappy moment. I hope El doesn't run into trouble at the canyon mainly that goon Bastian. Update again soon please. I want to see El, Ver'On and M'Pa holding screaming, squirming bundles of Yautja/human cuteness.
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  • From prairiefire on August 07, 2006
    Yeah. An update!!!!! I figured you had something up (I thought it would have been summer vacation).

    This chapter was so "AHHH." M'Pa is just the sweetest thing, and showing off for El. What a male.

    I don't know why, but after going to bed at 2 this morning I woke up at 4:30. I couldn't get back to sleep so I got up and came here to check for updates (first thing I do when I get up). I get here and "River Rapids" is updated. What a great thing to wake up to. I just had to sit down to read it.
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  • From prairiefire on August 02, 2006
    I don't know how long I can wait for this story to be updated. It is one of the best here. We waited so long for Ver'On and El's ritual, now we must wait and wait for her family reunion and her children's birth. Please update, please? I'll dedicate my next chapter to you.
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  • From ANON - scarslady13 on August 01, 2006
    please hurry and update, this story is like a drug to me, i check atleast 4 times a day for new chapters. that's how wonderful this story is.
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  • From ANON - Lorna on July 31, 2006
    Please update soon Please. I do read it just a little busy to write a review sometimes. I will be waiting for this Lorna
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  • From ANON - Artwzrd7 on July 22, 2006
    Loved it, especially the little boy's story...so touching. More please.
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  • From ANON - Nova on July 18, 2006
    Chapter 7? What happened to Chapter 6??
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  • From Retribution on July 18, 2006
    please keep writing, this story has become a part of my life it's great, and because of you I have tried my hand at writing, thanks so much
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  • From prairiefire on July 18, 2006
    It's chapter 6 but labeled chapter 7. hmmmm. Are you holding out on us? (OK, so I should be the last person asking that question.)

    I love what they did to Bastion. Way too funny.

    Don't wait so long to update again. This story is too good.
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  • From ANON - scar's lady on July 10, 2006
    can't wait for the next chapters, you are great.
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  • From prairiefire on July 05, 2006
    M'Pa is such a sweetie, even if he is clueless sometimes. He doesn't know what to do because it's his first time. Please. Hello, it's El's first time at motherhood too. I hope seeing her family doesn't send her into premature labor. Especially off the ship, away from Sa'ton and Ter'Oth.

    And I still say M'Pa and Ver'On need a thumping from at least one "father-in-law." You know, just cuz.
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  • From ANON - Anna on July 05, 2006
    Another excellent chapter!! I can't wait to see El's reactoin when she sees her "family" again. I'm also looking forward to seeing if Tan'ock will be successful in winning over a human mate. I juat have to say once again that I just love M'Pa!! *Grins* El seems like she's going to 'pop' soon. Keep up the great work, and please update soon!!!
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  • From prairiefire on June 24, 2006
    Well, bringing back El's family might get Ver'On off the hook for bugging out for months. But man, is Tan'oak gonna have his hands full dealing with both granddaughter and grandfather.
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